Reviews for Love in the Lagoon
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
NOOOOOOOOO! Where's the sex scene? :((((((

And why "just for this one night"?
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
That was very enjoyable
Nikki of FunLife chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
XD XD XD XD XD i can't stop SMILING! *wink*
masho chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
azukkar chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Very nice and just long enough! I like the effort you put into painting the background and showing how they had been attracted to each other before. It was very plausible. And your description of the lagoon was lovely.
bibliophilegirl25 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
really good u should add more to it.
Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
dapperyklutz chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
wow... _ ah love it...
amsev chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Lovely, funny, romantic one-shot!
Olympia chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
For further writing, you may be interested in this site: /sapienti_university_of_magic It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Olympia Collins, SUM student
BreadQueen42 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
That was quite an enjoyable read, unbetaed or no.
eac-dudette chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
that was amazing ... any chance at a sequil?
Hebe GB chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
That was sweet,entertaining and made me smirk. Thanks.

I know that you weren't beta'd but do you think that Snape would say 'real hard', his grammar teacher would spank him!
Isah Underhill chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
real nice, but you could have continued it a bit more, don't you think? real funny though :)

CancerChic chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Nice Job. I really like it.