|Reviews for Vestigial Dream|
| auburn-flare chapter 6 . 10/5/2008
Why hasn't anyone reviewed this yet? GAH!
I thought that this story was immensely entertaining. It's a very interesting un-canon fic and I loved it. I LOL'd when I found out that you made Ness the king.
Also, I thought that the way you wrote was kind of...addicting? I don't know. I just thought the way you write is very interesting. :)
However, I have to admit that it was a bit confusing, especially at the end. There are probably references in there that I didn't get or I just happened to miss/skim read some parts. Then again, you were probably aiming for that weird/serious effect tone on the story and deliberately left it like that. Afterall, you DID put it under Drama/Parody.
I'm not I very good reviewer am I? Second review on this site. :P Anyway, that's all I have to say. Keep it up. :)