|Reviews for Atoning The Past|
| VashtiMarie chapter 4 . 6/28
So now I'm sad. I was really getting in to this story when you hit me with two of the worst severitus cliches. The letter which explains it all and the glamour. I hate them both. Here's where I leave you. ox
| Guest chapter 35 . 5/25
I'M GONNA CRY NO NO NO NO HAAAAAAAAAAAARRY ITS BECAUSE OF LOVE NOOOOOOOO
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/25
I love how Snape stays in character, as does Harry and his friends...I love it!
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/25
OMG LUCIUS AND FAYE I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING I LOVE PLOT TWISTS!
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/25
I love how Harry bonds with Imogen in this chapter! :) The whole speech about light and dark is great!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Remedial potions. At six sharp. Storms out of room in a huff...*cloak billows dramatically out behind me*
Sorry,I couldn't resist.
I love your writing style!
| misherukuro chapter 35 . 2/8
What a way to end, very thrilling. ,
| SiriusHadesWinchester chapter 21 . 10/3/2012
what a nice nickname!
| KitanaKia chapter 25 . 7/20/2012
01/03/91 is mi birthday! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
| My Alternate Reality chapter 35 . 3/9/2012
great story, but I can't believe you ended it there I need for Harry to know the truth ;)
| baeIfire chapter 35 . 1/16/2012
I would just like to say I've enjoyed your story, it has been added to my favs as will the sequel. )
| tsukinopen chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
another servitus XD
| kat chapter 9 . 8/11/2011
the characters seem to interact naturally
| ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWQYZ1234 chapter 25 . 8/9/2011
I have read this all the way to chapter 25 without reviewing! I do this all the time with fanfiction's I love :L but I just wanted to say I rerally enjoy this fanfiction and I wanted to adress the questions you asked about Harry and Snapes love life.
It would be nice if harry fell in love but that doesn't necessarily mean that it has to happen in his years at hogwarts or with someone from hogwarts. It would make more sense if he had a few failed relationships before he found 'the love of his life' or at the very least the person he wants to marry. After his discussions with Remus it seems likely that he may go travelling through all the wizarding places (assuming that is what Remus did whilst Harry was living with the Dursleys as a child) so why not pair him with some foreign beauty? He diserves it after all the difficult years with the Dursleys and Hogwarts! :)
In answer to your other question I like Hermione but only when she is a friend to Harry. I think that in the sequel she needs to be.. told that her constant interference in peoples lives and having to know everything thing that Harry is doing can get quite annoying and even though she is doing it be cause she cares she should.. tone it down? :L
I don't like the pairing of Harry and Ginny in cannon because she wasn't a good developed character and in 6th year suddenly became Harry's love interest/ one and only, and then they got married? It doesn't make sense :L I don't like it in fanfictions where Ginny is always with the golden trio, or when Harry is telling Ron Hermione about the prophesy and other important information Ginny is with them.
I suppose pairing him with Ginny would be okay as long as you develop her and make Harry come to the realization slowly and not suddenly.. and preferable Harry goes travelling or sorts out his career before settling down as it is unnecessary for wizards & witches to marry after they leave school since they live it be over 100.
It would also be nice if Snape had a love interest since it is quite unbelievable to think of him being alone and loving lily for the rest of his live (remember they live to be over 100 which is completely normal for wizards)I think it would make sense for him to love someone if she or he showed kindness towards him. Throughout his entire life Lily was the only person tor be truly kind to him, stand for him and care for him. Plus she was a very good looking witch which is I think why Snape fell in love with her. If he had a love interest I don't think his love for lily would fade I cannot imagine Snape never loving Lily but I think he woudl be able to move on and be happy with someone else... Lily would want that for him and I think Harry would want that for his Father too :)
This is the biggest review I have ever written so I am sorry if I have repeated myself :) I am really enjoying this fanfiction and canno't wait to see how it ends! Keep up the good work for the sequel! And I will peobably read this again so you should be getting all your reviews with my thoughts on each chapter at some point! :D
| SLegend chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I am intrigued...I think I shall read further :-)