|Reviews for Doctor|
| the storme chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
the last line is awesome
| Kexy Kewl chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
It's good. Oh, it's really really good. I think this captures a significant part of the Master's feelings for the Doctor. It's a really good fic. Just be a bit more careful with your spellings. :)
| Theta Sigma chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
That was amazing.. and exactly right in my eyes. :)
| noideagirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
I love it, I absolutely love it!
It's a wonderful portrayal of what I imagine the Master would indeed feel about the Doctor.
Keep up the good work.
| pkmnfan11 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
i loved it. Reading this makes me wish that the Master didnt get killed off
| LilyIsAwesomerThanYou chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Ooooooh I loved it! :D
| Kabooshka chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
its beautiful... in a mastery way, you gotta love that guy.
Brilliantly written, i thought it was amazing :)
| Vortex Iris chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Very deep vivid discription, I really liked it!
| Payce D. Elui chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Nicely written :)
| elrond peredhel chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
This is really good, but can I suggest you use spell checker again?
Everytime you wrote the word 'threw', it should say 'through'.
other than that, i really liked it!
| A Lurking Demon of the Night chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Two words; MUTHERFUCKING AWESOME!
Sorry, but yeah, it is AWESOME!
| morph chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I love this. You have the balance between the Master and the Doctor all worked out. I loved the bits about the Master holding back because if the Doctor really let his darkness out, everything would burn. Really well done.
| 123-321 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
amazing, i loved it
| Spoons1899 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Very nice. It's not easy to do like a character study of the Doctor (or Master either) and you managed remarkably well with this piece. The writing is exceptionally powerful, I copied the lines that really stood out to me:
"He wanted the Doctor to scream as he tried to hold up the walls, hold onto his sanity and shut the pain out. The Master wanted his pain on the surface. He wanted to Doctor to lose all control. He wanted the Doctor to hear the drums."
This was wonderfully written.
"It would be so easy to break him, laughably easy, yet the Master never did. He knew the Doctor better than anyone after all; he "knew that if the Doctor ever lost control, nothing could stop him. The universe would burn."
I loved the universe line, very powerful.
"Deep down, the Doctor wanted to die. He doesn’t travel the universe fighting for a reason to live; he travels the universe trying to find a reason to live."
I thought this was incredibly astute, very good description of the Doctor and why he acts the way he does.
"You have to care to put that much hate into something."
Again, very clever and very true.
The Master knew though, the Doctor didn’t want anyone to die for him, he wanted them to live for him."
| Xbakiyalo chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
Wow, you captured the Master's personality so perfectly there O It's a scary thought, that the Master thinks like that, but it all fits so wonderfully. More people should portray the Master as /caring/ for the Doctor, because he clearly does (to some extent at least XD) Great story, I look forward to seeing more )