|Reviews for Fairy Tales Uncovered|
| koreseason chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
hansel and gretel
| Clar the Pirate chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
I really liked this and if I had to pick one reason why I'd say "Ah, an encore of the metallic strum." - it's just a very cool collection of words that manage to capture both the action and the character at once.
The only thing I was left wondering was how old the speaker is. It seems like she might be an old lady but some of her language sounds younger. Probably I'm just being ageist.
Um, the line beginning "Well, that was a stupid accusation..." has been split into three parts and the children should be doing *their* separate *chores*, yes?
Great job, update soon?
| huskiesluver411 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
hansel and gretal that was soo cute!