Reviews for Mates: Book Three
Unknown chapter 9 . 11/22/2014
OMG! I love this series! Please write more! I NEED to know what happens next!
zaph chapter 9 . 4/22/2013
Okay you have me hooked. I have enjoyed all the crazy humor(batman...serial cookie killer... too funny) in the earlier books. Now thats 'its gotten real ' in the later books I am even more hooked. .MORE!
nequam-tenshi chapter 9 . 9/12/2010
There is finally peace between J'onn and Bruce but what about Shayera and John? Diana and Wally?
ChibiLover123 chapter 9 . 5/22/2010
...WHOA...You know, I kind of understand why, out of everyone, Batman is the only one apathetic from Ares' demise. It's because everything he'd done had been fueled, somewhat, by anger, and without Ares, it left him. Without his anger, everything else lost its base and fell through. Huh...Anyway, that's just my opinion.

Great job!

More?
Out of Things to Say chapter 9 . 2/12/2010
-sniff- I wanna help them just kill the bad guy so they can all be happy again.-sobs- Poor wally, Poor Bruce, Poor EVERYONE! But I kinda realize that you need to face all these obstacle and overcome them before you can truly understand each other. It's a bit conflicting... I blame Diana (a little) but I also understand why she did... *that*. Self-preservation. The way you write this fic, just makes them so... real. I always had this *whoa* image of them, but u bring them down to earth and make them approachable. So thanks and Keep up the good work!
Rai Science chapter 9 . 2/11/2010
Excellent, as always. Diana's part made me sad, and J'onns parts made me grin.
Dark Inu Fan chapter 9 . 2/11/2010
In a way, that world is breaking them along the fracture lines that they already had in their soul. J'onn's belonging, Wally's acceptance, Diana's 'family'... It just proves that they are 'human'... but what makes them heroes is being able to overcome that. Keep up the good work, dark
Dark Inu Fan chapter 8 . 10/7/2009
If Wally and Diana had to go through that, I have to wonder what the others will go through. This is why the other heroes went insane, they were unable to complete their tasks. Keep up the good work, dark
Rai Science chapter 8 . 9/26/2009
I really really like this! Are J'onn and Bruce gonna be last to get fixed?

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The challenge was nifty, but I can't believe J'onn hit Bruce!

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So sorry I haven't talked these past days. My internet died, I don't have a car, and e-mail at school is frowned upon.
Kyer chapter 8 . 9/24/2009
The world is awful...but not so awful that we don't continue to want to be in it. (Otherwise the suicide rate would be astronomical.)

Now I'm wondering...what was going through Diana's mind while all of this was going on?
Grey Grapevines chapter 8 . 9/23/2009
And the story rolls on! Gosh, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I still want to know Ares' and Batman's connection. Like, I get the implication of the 'god to believer' relationship (but cause it's Batman he probably doesn't care too much for Ares and their 'spiritual connection'), but I'm just wondering if it'll be expanded more. ANYWAYS, I'm looking forward to the next read, update when you can, please and thanks!
unnamed chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
heya! really ecstatic that you updated this story...love this pairing and the extreme over-protectiveness of j'onn and bats is adorable and very believable now that they have such a strengthened bond. And a jealous superman is hilarious! Haha. hopefully you'll have more for this story..but if not just a note to say that I really appreciate the series and if real life has caught up with you, am glad for what you've posted so far! interesting concept..though at times a little rushed. all the best in everything
Rai Science chapter 7 . 6/5/2009
This is hysterical. Die superman DIE DIE DIE!

! DIE! AND BURN UNDER THE FLAMES OF MY MIGHTY POKEMON! (ANDS THEIR ELECTRICITY, AND ICE, AND PSYCHIC POWERS, AND ROCKS AND EVERYTHING ELSE!)

This was great. But I am YOUR BETA1! Why did you not tell me! Who cares if i'm busy with finals.
Sarahc4321 chapter 7 . 5/27/2009
Your ALIVE! I can't belive it. Thank you for updating.

I hope you also update Mars: An Elseworld Story, because even after all this time, I can't get it off my mind.

You're amazing!
Rai Science chapter 6 . 11/23/2008
HEY! THIS IS EXCELLENTE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Please can you send me the avatar pics of bruce and j'onn and Chocos
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