Reviews for Captive
nicolive chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Wow... I love it... Its kinda a Hades/Persephone type story! This is really great if slightly creepy. Still sweet...
FowlFanGirl chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Umm well ok
love-serenades chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
i love it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
is this a joke? finish it please!
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
pretty good, but i dont get what happening in the begining or why she is captive
emma1gibson chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Aw...i can't believe he would kidnap her again, but it does make an amazing story plot!

I absolutely love it!


zelovelyone chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Pls hurry and update. It's really good!
Meova chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
You know I love this. I don't think this needs any more work. It's definitely one of my favorite pieces ever written, and I hope one day my stories will match this quality :)

Love, Meo
xRissychanx chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Aww awesome ;_;
Lacus chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
oh my god. It is so sensual. How do you write like that. A little more things could happen though. Like, Artemis when he is really frustrated slaps Holly and admits that he loves her than just saying he loves her. The story is nice enough but details of Holly's mix of feelings between misery, love and hate could be emphasized more.
Pie chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Keep writing it please! it's very good.

um, don't know what's wrong with it...

maybe too much description?

)PLEASE keep writing.
Opal Roseblossom chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
I read this weeks ago, so I decided that I might as well read it again once you posted it up here. :D

I thought that it was funny because I read a chaptered fic by Winged-Silhouette just like it right before I got the email alert that this was posted up. So I decided that it was a sign. :D

Great job, nice angst. Basically everything I said before.

I keep trying to envision what happened to him to turn him this way.
ilex-ferox chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
I liked this piece. It was well-written, with a balance of dialogue and description and enough angst to create an edge to the story without going over the top. Interesting insight into Artemis' emotions, although perhaps there should have been more on Holly's reactions even though the piece is largely from his POV. Thanks