Wonderful story.

Okay Harry's home in under the fedilus charm so that magical's can't find it with Gibbs as the secret keeper so when did Gibbs tell Moony the secret so that he could go with Harry to his house?

Okay as I understand it Harry is taking the place of Tony... so why is Tony mentioned in this chapter? Also in chapter 10 you contradicted yourself in that the minister of magic had decided to let the non-magical's know about them then was told that the United States were ahead of the curve in that point in that all major agencies already knew as did the President, so why in this chapter was the President so eager to meet magical's wouldn't he have already done so? Why did the minister get upset about Gibbs' team knowing about magic and then again decide to tell about magic?

Damn, I was just hoping that Harry would keep the lovely girl with the naval uniform, and Mione too. Too bad.

An excellent story. Have you given any thoughts towards a sequel yet?

sweeet :)

write a story like this one but make it a harry/ziva story.

It's a good story so far, I'm enjoying the plot. However, I did notice a small mistake at the end of the chapter (Wedding scene). "I bless these rings in the name of the Father, the Spirit and the Holy Ghost" - as said by the Pastor during the wedding. Normally I wouldn't correct a religious thing (given I'm not religious and you might indeed be a Christian in some form or another. However, as far as I know, which is a fair bit given how commonly I've heard the phrase, even if in reference, but I'm mostly sure it should be "The Father, The Son and the Holy Spirit" (or in Latin, which is more for the Catholic side of the equation, "in nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti"). Again apologise if I am indeed wrong and you, assuming you are Christian, know for certain the correct version, but as far as I am aware this is the proper form.

Aw! Wish there was more, but this was good... :-(

Hmmm, wonder what'll happen now...?

Shit just got real! *grins*

you need to label this story correctly, it is not a Harry Potter story, it is a HP/NCIS crossover. I avoid these because I don't like the universe pairing, please go change what category this si placed in :/

I'm really sorry but it seems rather tacky that you need to use original NCIS dialogue, replacing Tony with Harry instead of coming up with your own plot and story. I also dislike the fact that you switched them in the first place since they have very different personality types. Needless to say I'm giving up on this story as a bad cause. I personally think it could even be a copy right infringement or plagiarism.

This was a really cute story. None of the major ideas was particularly original, but they don't need to be when you recombine them in a novel way. The story did stretch on a little bit - the novelty somewhat wore off after Harry had been on the NCIS team for a few chapters and was reliving the TV series. Still, good read. Thanks.

This was a lovely ending for a beautiful story.

Sincerely,
Miriam