Reviews for Happy Birthday Kashi
sara chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
wow, that's just cute and hot at the same time...
animemetoo chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
SWEET! I loved this! Thanks for sharing!
Shimaki-33 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
OMG this was so kiwaii and so very hawt! I really loved it

was that Kakashi's wish? if so, then it was so sweet!
Lupus Animi chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Cute as can be, with sprinkles on top! XD

Lovely writing.

If I may...maybe you could vary your word choice a little more? Like, say, the word kiss:


touch of lips

breathless, they engaged again...

...just try to avoid using the same descriptive words twice in the same paragraph. Not being nitpicky, just trying to help you improve.

Hope it was helpful for you! *huggles coz I love all your work*
lo chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I have lately been bored by sex scenes but yours was really well done. That just proves that not just anyone can write a sex scene and make it good. Nice job!
CopyNinAstral chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
As if it wasn't beautiful enough, you had to add that subtle cake message...didn't you? Mocha and vanilla?

Lovely, thank you for sharing!~ :D

Oro-sama chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
AWW that was SO cute! _ *sighs happily* u just GOTTA love Kakashi/Iruka.
Ally Plz chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
“I wish…that you’ll stay with me for as long as forever is for us.”

I nearly cried when I read the wish... it's sweet, but the possibility of either of them getting killed is high *sob*

This is truly the best birthday for Kakashi ever
DarkAuroran chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
What a beautiful wish. And vanilla pudding in the middle of the cake, YUM!
Bekkii Black chapter 1 . 9/15/2008

Kakashi should have birthdays more often ;)

i've read most of your other fics, but didn't realise this was by you till about halfway through XD
SakuraKiss13 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Aw, so kawaii!
reeby10 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
aw so cute! and the ending was so sweet! hehe i loved it! :D
beyondthecrystalsea chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
i always, always enjoy your fics. .

they always put a smile on my face.
MSYOU chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Aww that was a wonderful fic and the last line was just love XDD so heart warming :D Iruka should definitely be in charged of my next birtday XD! not to mention that coffee cake sounds good o.o damn now im hungry _ lol adding this one to favorites :)
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