Reviews for Son of a Legendary Dark Knight
RainbowsOfLaughs chapter 3 . 11/28
I meant shot to hell.
RainbowsOfLaughs chapter 3 . 11/28
Chapter one's confrontation between Naruto and Kyuubi is FAAAAAR to straight forward. Chapter 2 is just. Hard to explain. It just isn't right. The grammar is, with no other words to explain. Shot to used in titles. Not 'She was cutethey've been friends ever since.' It's not 'tells Tenten about Tsunade' when your in past-time. Your also missing CRUCIAL dots in chapter three. What also doesn't make sense is. Why are you writing 2 names in English, 'Uchiha Panther, Pink Cat.' And then 'Kuro Tenshi.'? It just doesn't make sense. Right now I'm refusing to read more
uzuuchi007 chapter 6 . 7/25/2014
Michael Bourne chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
holw the hell did naraku get into the naruto realm
Master-of-Masters chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
please update i love your story so far
i also really like how you made gaara a girl just out of curiosity is 'she' going to be in naruto's harem
Ja Ne
Diamondstar the Seeker chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
I am not complaining about Gaara, besides he looks alittle bit of a girl, anyway, hey, your going to contine this story, it's so great, I'am giving it a 5 stars rate.
pensuka chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
this is quite a interesting chapter and the way they reacted when they found out naruto could read minds hehe classic
pensuka chapter 6 . 12/14/2011
oh this will be good i wonder what will happen next please keep updating it
Tirion Fordring chapter 3 . 5/9/2011
that's irony... A black angel weilding Beowulf the LIGHTbeast's gauntlets...

I would say it's twilight... but Twilight is shit...

God I hate that book, it took one of my favorite words from me! Now I have to say dusk or dawn, and neither of those sound cool!

Not In Use Anymore 35 chapter 6 . 11/18/2010
Nice I can't wait for the rest, have Naruto kill Orochimaru during the invasion.
NARUHAREM FOREVA chapter 5 . 7/16/2010
this is a very good story, however, to me it just seems like your skimming over it, instead of actually telling the story
Drifter950 chapter 6 . 2/26/2010
I liked this story a lot.

With your "Updated: 11-10-08", it could be any of a dozen things, including the dreaded writers block. I am putting this in my Story Alert in the hopes you will get back to it sometime.

Thanks for a good story.

May the MUSE always be with you!

Devilsummoner666 chapter 5 . 1/26/2010
When are you going to update? Also make the chapters longer
Devilsummoner666 chapter 6 . 10/27/2009
Make the chapters longerin the next chapters
subterra59 chapter 6 . 10/1/2009
nice, can't wait for the next one
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