Reviews for First
Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Oh my goodness this was the bestest most adorable thing EVER!
akirak chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
EEEEEEK no matter how many times i read this i always get red and happy XD
soubides chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Waaahh how cute there so nervous for there first time!

I love the way you wrote this, how they switched povs and stuff made it easier to read_Anyways good job!(;
KyuuketsuKomorine chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Wow, I hardly EVER review anything I read, so does leaving something of this length tell you how much I really loved this? This was possibly one of the most beautiful fanfictions I've ever read. I've read through a lot of lemons about the twins, and yours is by far the best. In pretty much anything I've read about Hika-chan and Kao-chan, it's either really kinky and smutty, or really shameless. You've changed my opinion: This was a wonderful story because the twins have a soft side that's nervous about their first time, and I also really liked all the comments about the moonlight, and how it set the mood and all. But like I said, It's sweet, and I guess what you could call a soft-hardcore lemon, because there's love between them, not lust, like usual. I'm looking forward to more stories from you!

Vampire-Angel9 chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I'v read all your story's. I lovw them, it's hard t find good story's w/ the twins like this. And your Tamaki and Kyouya stories are AMAZINg
RainingArrows chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
lol, The first time is always awesome, ne?

It was totally fluffy and I would have loved to be that woman in the sex shop X3
charrybarry chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
another night good for guilty pleasures! _ AWESOME JOB!
CloudFairFF7 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
i vote the twins
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
OMG, I love it! *Glomps fic* If you're a fangirl, then you exist for this sort of thing. o- I lover reading firsts! ...Does that make me a pervert? T-T Ah, who the hell cares! :D The point is, the twins are hot! And you two write them very well.
RockerGirl0709 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
This story was so AWESOME! You guys are awesome too. I absolutely love the twins! They're my favorite! HikaruxKaoru 4ever!
LovelySparrow chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Another fabulos story! Please continue to write the smut!
Ryuujin Youkai chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Ok... That was beautiful. lol

I love how you guys do these, reminds me of what a friend and myself used to to. XD

Anyway, definitely keep making... I'm sure I'm not the only one who will keep reading.

And in response to your profile question... The twins are definitely hotter. X3
animelvr23 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
i love it! so kawaii! that was the sweetest evah! Ja ne!~ PLEASE~ UPDATE! ASAP~!
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
I'm glad you're not giving it up... what would us fangirls do without it?
orochimarusbadgirl chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
the first time is always nerve racking, isn't it?
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