|Reviews for Where I End|
| Narges chapter 5 . 3/6/2013
beautifully written. thank you.
| nepalipranshu chapter 5 . 9/3/2012
I literally had chills while reading this! Amazing job :)
| Sky-Angel14 chapter 5 . 12/22/2009
AWESOME STORY KEEP WRITING!
| Renom chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Dear God. The best interpretation of Edward's feeling at that moment that I've ever read. Bravo.
| Justine Lark chapter 5 . 2/4/2009
Well, I would have liked this to go a bit further into his understanding that they weren't dead. But it was still really great overall.
| Justine Lark chapter 4 . 2/4/2009
This chapter is awesome. It's beautiful. I love that Edward has a vision of Bella the way she had those hallucinations of him.
| Justine Lark chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
Wow, this is amazing. Very emotional. Really well done.
| Justine Lark chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
So powerful! Lots of great heart-wrenching stuff in this chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more.
| moonliteroses394 chapter 5 . 1/26/2009
It rlly IS a beautiful story. Very well written and it has the perfect descriptions of the emotions Edward felt. I was so close to crying! My eyes were starting to water. lol
| iloveboyswhoSpARkle.17 chapter 5 . 1/6/2009
WOW! your story was amazing i just found it and couldnt stop reading. amazing job on getting Edwards POV :) cant wait to read your future work :D
| TheSingingGirl chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
This is emotion dressed up as poetry. Pure unadulterated passion in the guise of a story.
If I could cry, I would. I really would. Unfortunately, I can't. Stupid illness.
Usually I would try to give a proper critique, but quite frankly, forget it.
| Destiny Kalince chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
I like it _ sounds bad but yes I do
| PrincessFerdinand chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
I am quite frankly AMAZED that this story does not have THOUSANDS of reviews. It is the BEST story I have read on here EVER. You get in Edward's mind SO WELL and capture his pain SO PERFECTLY it is NOT EVEN FUNNY. You are like Stephenie Meyer in disguise! I cannot WAIT for you to post! When you've written a bestselling book and have millions of dollars, I will be the first to read it. WRITE MORE SOON!
| BooksBooksBooksBooks chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
Oh, wow that is so amazing!
I cant even think of what
to say to sum up how i felt
about this! I mean it was so
good that i could really
see it all happening, and i
felt exactly the same way as
edward did. I love how you
did his thoughts, like when
he said “I can’t believe how
quick it was,” I voiced aloud,
and then to reassure her,
“I didn’t feel a thing-they’re
In the book, it didnt say that
he was saying that to reassure
her, and I never thought
that might even be the reason
before, but now that you say
it, it fits perfectly. I just
brought that up because it
really shows that you really
thought about what you were
writing. And when he was making
sure that she was safe, and than
that he was, that fit so well,
and was so completly edward.
I cant even tell you how
amazing that i thought this
was. I think that you wrote
this beautifuly. at frist
I was sad about the end, because
they are both dead, but
after I thought about it,
it actually really is a
sweet ending, well bitter sweet
i think. It almost had a romeo, and
juliet feel to the end.
I am sad that this is over, because
i really like your writing style,
but I think this was the perfect
way to end it. Thanks for
sharing this with us! I loved it!
| Of.Winged.Poets chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
Very good. I love this story.