|Reviews for Suddenly I See|
| yuki chapter 43 . 4/10
shit. this Is just so sad man...
| Guest chapter 44 . 1/16
I'm crying! This and Ivy's POV story were both so beautiful and tragic, and I feel you captured and wrote each character so perfectly, enough to bring out emotions. Thank you for Sirius's side of the story and you are an amazing writer. Keep up the fantastic work!
| Dusty Miller chapter 44 . 10/12/2014
...asdfghjk. I who just said I was glad not to get to read Sirius' reaction to Ivy's death in Ivy's POV story.
It was nice to see everything from Sirius' perspective, and I must say you managed to catch what a difference people have in their views upon life. It's amazing how you've used another writing style in this story as well, it's all very Sirius and I like it, a lot.
It made me very sad to read the last few chapters, but it's something different from many other stories where everything is all dandy. Personally, I read and write to live in another world where everything is better than in my real life at the moment (nothing sirius), but sometimes it's good to get a reality check. Thank you for writing this!
| Ginny-T-Potter chapter 44 . 7/9/2014
You're an incredible author, and I sincerely hope you continue writing. This journey was brilliant. Really, I can't get enough Sirius/Ivy/Remus.
| wickedgrl123 chapter 44 . 5/20/2014
That funeral scene just ripped my heart out. So beautiful and painful. Makes me wish they got their happy ever after, but there is just so much meaning in the way she died. Wonderful job :)
| Clirkus chapter 44 . 5/2/2014
Damn it... you accomplished what no other fanfiction author has. You made me cry.
| ReadingStar chapter 44 . 4/6/2014
This killed me, I was going to write a nice long review like I usually do but I can't... Maybe tomorrow morning when I'm not crying...
I loved it though, I love this so much I'm going to read more fics about them because they're just so perfect together...
| ReadingStar chapter 43 . 4/6/2014
So I didn't cry at this bit on Ivy POV, I'd expected it. I'd expected it even more over here but their reactions... Oh Gods, I can't stop crying.
This is so well written... You got their emotions just right. The way everyone felt... Everything...
I god, I'm literally crying.. This was so sad and perfectly written...
I love this fic...
| ReadingStar chapter 19 . 4/6/2014
And... I hate Sirius... as expected...
Seeing what he went through during these two Chapters was... different, but I liked it... I think... I mean he made me feel like punching him (nothing new...) but seeing his POV was, well, well written!
| ReadingStar chapter 18 . 4/6/2014
AAAG... I FINALLY GET TO SEE WHAT SIIRIUS THOUGHT DURING THIS BIT IN DETAIL! *squeals/ fangirls* /because reading this bit in Ivy POV was... annoying... I felt like punching Sirius... yeah...
| ReadingStar chapter 12 . 4/6/2014
Can I just say while reading this Chapter I was on the verge of strangling Sirius... I mean fine he didn't mean it but he is soo oblivious to everything... urgh...
Btw, I did NaNoWriMo this year too! (idk why but I felt like saying that...)
| crimsoncomfort chapter 44 . 2/11/2014
Okay, so right now its midnight, and I just finished this story, I really should be asleep, but I needed to write this review otherwise I'd be thinking about it all night. I loved it. I read Nobody Sees Me Wishing in like two days and I immediately starting reading this story today. I'm so incredibly sad that Ivy was killed, but it is a great example of the casualties of war and that even though Ivy wasn't in the order she was still killed. I may or may not have bawled my eyes out like a little girl upon finishing your story. Everything about it was so perfect, in both SiS and NSMW, the way you wrote them... it just sort of flowed. There is no other way I can describe it other than perfect. Seriously, I'm at a loss for words.
Just... keep writing stories because I like you and I love your writing and you're fantastic and talented and awesome. This has been the first story (this includes Nobody Sees Me Wishing) that I have cried this hard over, and I just want to thank you so much for posting this and taking all of us readers on an awesome ride with the Marauders and Ivy and Eleanor and everyone else. Thank you.
Okay, I think thats enough writing. Sleepy times for me now. Keep writing awesome stuff and yeah.
And this is a bit long. Woops.
| muzikchic4eva chapter 44 . 11/10/2013
I wasn't initially going to write a review, not because I hated the story, but because just typing something out about Sirius and Ivy was seriously going to make me start bawling. no pun intended.
I read 'Nobody Sees Me Wishing' before I read this, and I remember being confused after reading about her death, because I just couldn't believe it. How could she die? She needed to make up with Sirius, get married to Sirius, be happy with Sirius. But then again, that's why it's so tragic. She was never fully involved with the war, but she still got murdered.. and that's war. It's just so horrible, so evil, so wrong, and I really think you captured that.
And Sirius' reaction.. I'm tearing up now even thinking about it. All I can do is tear up while thinking about Sirius and Ivy's ending, and while there's the comfort that they were in love with each other and happy before it ended, it's not the same knowing that they'll never get together.
But back to the story this review is for.. I really loved how this was in Sirius' POV. It cleared up a lot of stuff, like the main reason why Sirius was "glaring" at Ivy and making her think he hated her. How he figured out Sebastian was him, and the novel was about them. And especially the ending. My gosh, the ENDING. I think my heart broke reading about Sirius and how he dealt with Ivy's death, especially after he never had the chance to give her her ring, and could only give it to her at her funeral.
It's ironic that Remus and Sirius are the last of the Marauder's alive (we'll conveniently forget Peter) and they were both so closely related with Ivy, either as her best friend or her lover respectively.
It might be sad, and so bittersweet, but I couldn't help but have a request. Could you write a one-shot set during the Order of the Phoenix where Remus and Sirius reflect over Ivy? And maybe the cause of it all was Harry asking for advice on girls to the both of them, maybe during the Christmas break?
I am so in love with SiriusxIvy that it's emotionally painful to even think about them. I can't imagine Sirius with anyone else.
| xxSiriusxxforeverxx chapter 44 . 8/20/2013
Aw so sad...:(
| angrypixels chapter 44 . 8/14/2013
Oh god cried over this toooooo
Pls write an alternative ending .. I dunno, letting her resurrect in the future ;)!