Reviews for Year of the Spark: September 15
kaitebug chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
i love it. great story
sapphiretwin369 chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Besides the fact that it suddenly went from 3rd person to first person and the slight out of characterness, it was really good. :) I liked it! Especially with Lorne in there! I love him and I love how you wrote him! :) And I love the ending of course! :) Nice job!
ancientesha chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
aw! nice.

“Please don’t cry, I hate it when you cry.” - i love that line. so well written!
Jo Wilson chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
This was beautifully written.
sparklyshimmer2010 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
OMG this is amazing. perfect. i loved it! it was a bit odd when it suddenly shanged to first person point of view at the top, but this was overall done well. i liked the fact John was all nervous and all"THE sentence" lol. You should totally get an account - i want to read more!