|Reviews for Vampirates: What Happens Now?|
| zaro93 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
very good 4 a first story i'm still having problems just getting my story in. your story still lacks something maybe more explantion
| DarkDragonQueen0 chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
That was really great
i really want 2 no wat happens next
please update soon!
| bubblemoon66 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
O...LOVE IT! Lots of suspense. I loved Lorcan's thoughts...the voice bit made me laugh ;D
And I definitely agree that Grace would feel sorry for Jonny
The different viewpoints are a little bit distracting but I see why you had to keep changing them.
Anyway loved it loads and can't wait to see what happens next!
Ps. Sorry to be annoying but you did say constructive criticism, so... its "thought" not "thunk" ;)
Hope to see it updated soon!