This is by far the best story I've read about Tsunade and Jiraiya. I always look for this story, but it seems I can never remember the title. You did such an amazing job with this. (:

awww! love it! it is so sweet and sad! love it soooo much, one of my fav ones by you!

You have a lot of quote-worthy lines in here! Amazing. A well done piece of work!

this was beautiful..

Wow - what a great story!

I really love the pairing Tsunade/Jiraiya and its so sad Jiraiya died in the series... Thats why I love the fact you placed them in a totally different universe! Maybe they can be happy together here...

The entire part of their conversation - beginning with Jiraiya coming to stay with her and ending with him staying forever, or so I hope - really is a masterpiece and the quotes - I love Frost - fit perfectly. Though you had me searching quite a bit because I just couldnt find a poem by the title "Remembrance" - though I found one called "Reluctance" with the right words, so maybe you just have confused them.

Either way, this story is beautiful! A great job.

A truely beautiful story.

I was enraptured thoughout the entire story. The way you used Jiraiya's occupations and interests to set the story was sheer brilliant.

I really liked this AU, in the way it was written and how it turned out. You portrayed the relationship between the two perfectly. I have always seen Jiraiya as the hopeless romantic with a wicked and angsty twist.

The poetry referance is also adds a nice flow to the story when they begin their interaction.

Was totally thrown off gaurd at the fight at the end, the break down of Jiraiya's character was so clear and profound that I would say I could almost see the very essence of what he is made of.

I also agree with 'Cyberwolf' there is little enough love or support for this couple and I would like to thank you for showing how much can be taken from there relationship. Whether it be love, angst, hurt, anger, lose or one of many other facets.

Your writting is very good, if not brilliance.

This is definately a favourite of mine and I'll be looking froward to some of your other materials and those that are maybe soon to come.

Either way keep up the amazing work.

I nearly teared up! o: This was such a good fic! (:

Love, love, love this! The relationship between Tsunade and Jiraiya is always so interesting and I love the way you've portrayed it :)

This is truly adorable! It had me awe-ing throughout the whole thing! It has depth and I love that! Great story!

Very interesting...

VERY god!

i'm so sad that he died in manga... they could have been such a great couple...

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p.s. you are awesome)

Hi!

I'm a big sucker for anything JirTsu, and This was so sweet and poignant... it was beautiful. I really like your style of writing and I hope to see more from you soon!

-Wolf

wow that was amazing!

that was absolutely moving and fantastic!

Great fic! loved how tsunade was strong yet open with her feelings :) i hope u write a epilogue or sequel :) i love how ur tid bits of poems fix nicely into the story :) Jiraiya was very sweet and that was nice to see...i think hes a big softy for nade:)