Reviews for Hesitation
3 cups 0f tea chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
If you didn't leave hints in your authors note, I would've been completely fooled that this is a NatsumeMikan fic. :)I must say, first H/N fanfic I've ever read and I loved it. :) Your writing style is really good, and I think the first part, though quite admittedly confused me a bit at first, was a really nice touch to the story. How so? It just is. :D It's like an opening, an introduction, a teaser of some sort. Truthfully, I thought that the 'someone' was Ruka, until I read the line about the country girl. :) Didn't expect it to be Hotaru. And my gawsh! Hotaru having feelings for Natsume? Unusual, and I love it! :D I think Hotaru is a pretty hard 'specimen' to characterize, but you were able to do so quite wonderfully. It's a whole new angle of perspective to Hotaru's usually cold demeanor. :D Two thumbs up for you! Hope you continue writing such beautiful stories! :D
StarAngel02 chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
its gud :)
Nemesis of Truth chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Hotaru x Natsume?

Well, to say it simply, it was... sweet. Though I just can't picture Hotaru liking Natsume, the way they always fight (in the manga), its an unbelievable situation... Hah...

Well, I'm feeling tired, I'll go sleep... Bye :)!
M3lancholique chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Nice...

do u think there r any other ppl who had made a HXN fic b4?