Reviews for The Eternal, the Mortal
Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
This story is fine! Needs more hugs...
ShadowQueen1996 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
i can actually see kyuubi acting like naruto's dad 0.o don't know how but i do
Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
cool
The Dead Snake chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Aw, how sweet.

And LOL at "her hips are too narrow to deliver healthy kits".

Yay :]
Hijokugei chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
snort.

Kyuubi, apparently, REALLY loves champagne.
Lixie Lorn chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Ouch... poor Naruto, poor Kyuubi.

General Everin Stormclaw of the Emerald Stars, Dragon Prince and the Fifth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy, out.
Rena the pirate jedi wizard chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Hello, I read this a few days ago, but never reviewed. I'm sorry about that. Anyway, I really liked the perspective you gave the Kyuubi in this. I thought it was really meaningful and it made me cry the second time I read it through (I read it four times). I really did like it and especially liked when Kyuubi was talking about merging their souls so he could boast of him to future containers.
NICE chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
That was interesting. Good job! But I really don't think Kyuubi feels that way about Naruto... Still really innovated!