I just wanted to tell you, years now after you wrote this story, how very much I am enjoying what you have created!

Good story! Thanks for writing.

I love this story... the writing, the characterizations, the plot... it's all so good. Kinda feel like Bella waiting for Edward to return to finish the story, but not knowing if it will ever happen. Life gets in the way of course, but hoping the writer is out there somewhere and might give finishing it a go! I still come back anyways and re-read over and over.

Please please please come back and finish this story. You seemed so excited about the next part.

Whoaa

I am so glad that was a dream. I was sitting here thinking no way is our feisty Bella just letting this happen without even a conversation first.

Good for her. I like this Bella telling the guys off.

I e read this 4 times over the years. I love the story and how you write. I love this version of Bella and her monstrous wolf-dog. It’s been awhile but I hope you come back to this. I want to see what Dr. Ryerson says and how things resolve between the two creatures who love her most.

WOW!

Ooh! I had forgotten about that!

This is one of the most standout scenes from any story in this fandom. Priceless. But I just want to mop the blood up from the floor before someone slips!

Beautiful writing

Her grief jumps out the page. Excellent rant to Jake.

I love that Jake isn’t just the name for the dog but that said dog is actually named after real Jake. Quite right too.

I’m reading this for a second time. I know it isn’t marked complete but I remember it ends in an OK place and the story is just so good. Excellent writing.