Reviews for You Play With Fire & It's Gonna Burn You
m0nt chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
fuck that is so hot
borntodanceninefour chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Really amazing! Please turn this into a story!
RoseArcadia chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
That was too good!
hottygurl7 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Loved this story! Would be cool if it continued on and she left him for Edward... *Wishful thinking*... :D
darynthe chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Oh man, tipping my hat to you. An original voice, your writing of smut is sincere and really conveys the feeling and the necesary tension. You have a great new fan!
yankeerose chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Ri0t chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
OMG! you should SO make that a story..!. that has GOT to be one of the BEST stories ive ever read. yeah the lemons were cool to.. but like i really liked the fact that she was married an it was a affair.. lol.. I personally just think you would have a very good story that is if you decide to make it a story.. lol. GREAT one-shot...
Naomitron chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
That was fantastic. I wish I had more words for you here, but I'm still flabbergasted. Wonderful writing here. Well done.
EpicLoVeFan chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Wow! This is utterly amazing. Again, wow!
RedCarpetRuler chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
OMG That was SO freaking GOOD!

You should definetly continue it.

I gasped LOUDLY when I read the end and my sis looked over at me like i was crazy

(ha well i prob shouldn't be reading smut with other people in the room anyways haha)

You are an EXCELLENT writer and i think more of this story would be REALLY REALLY GOOD! haha

looking forward to more

pinkhungryhippos chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
oh my fucking goodness

you are my hero :]

this is amazing

i love it soo much

there aren't even words

I'm so jealous of Bella :]


Ashley chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
absolutely loved it! you should definately make this a story. would read it for sure!
Lizzie Hopscotch chapter 1 . 1/18/2009

this was awesome and it should totally be continued as a story

*gets on knees and begs for it to be a story*


Lizzie Hopscotch
edwardsgirl chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
you should continue this!xx
Lahali chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
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