Reviews for You Play With Fire & It's Gonna Burn You
higher hunter aka jo schmoe chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
wow... that was hot. you should continue it!
cullenitis chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
GOD #$%ING DAMMIT! that wasn't just hot that was WHITE HOT!
justbri chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
GREAT one-shot! Wouldn't mind it in a story, either... ;-)
Jennmc75 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
That was an awesome one shot. If you took it further, I would glady read it. I just have to say there is nothing sexier than Edward repeating mine in the throws of passion.I totally get you and love what you write. I hope you get better. I miss Eat You Alive, but understand how real life tends to intrude on writing (not to mention wicked writer's block).
olivia chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
holy crap! talk about intense, my eyes were like glued to the screen. prettyu darn wicked! great writing!

musicluv585 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
That was so great! loved it! it wouldn't be a bad story either but i loved this lemon lol you should write another one! :)
pandz0rz chapter 1 . 9/16/2008

That's good.
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
This was really good!
cause-werewolves-dont-sparkle chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
That was WOW

I loved the end when it said

My name is Edward Anthony Cullen.

Her name is Isabella Marie Black.

... and she is my heroin.

I wold ove it if this was turned into a story with more chapters I think it would be cool to read on and see what happens.

Poor Jacob is going tolose his wife I feel kinda bad for him

Great job I loved it


JSTEW chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
So.. she's married to Jake.. and she cheated on him, multiple times, w/ Edward. lol, sweet, I loved it.
Elizabeth93 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
wow- that was pretty intense. i liked it. the sneaking around made it even better. you made Edward very horny, but hten again he must've been that way in Twilight too. he's just not as expressive as a vampire... loved this one-shot. it did remind me a lot of your other story. but i love that one too so hey... XD
Kaya10284 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I would love to see this story pan out. It was awesome.
4everbellaxedward chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
wait who is the other man? is she dating somebody?
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