Great story! I couldn’t stop reading it till the end... I wish there were more chapters once they finally got together :) Loved the epilogue with the funeral and the honeymoon!
Thanks for sharing!

Wow! I’ve read some pretty stupid, plotless stories this definitely or how you like to write defiantly takes the cake. Pure trash future readers don’t waste your time

The way you don’t know how to spell definitely really ruins the story. Defiantly! Lol

I know this is super old, but come on - video cams existed.

The ref would have been fired at the very least, along with receiving a hefty fine. The opposing team probably wouldn’t have played for the rest of the year. Basketball has rules.

Also, the letter from Sam- that could be used as evidence in court - that player could have been charged.

By the way, Bella was knocked out and these games have a medics on hand. She would have been sent to the hospital. She obviously had a concussion.

Still a favourite after many years

WTH am I reading. This fic had real potential, but is now a confusing mess ever since Edward left Bella, the chick he apparently is IN LOVE WITH, in order to screw Millie? And now Edward is having an emotional break for Bella leaving him when he has no right to be like that? Also, WTH is Alice so casual about the fact that she is supposed to be helping Edward with Bella, but is completely fine that he's now with Mille?! What a freakin joke.

I'm about to scream because i'm so happy!

Poor Edward.

FINALLY!

But when Edward will finally tell Bella that SHE is Mrs. X?!

I just don't see it. Why would Edward go after Bella ? He didn't made the best first impression on her, alright, but she was way out of line to the point of bitchyness. Is he a masochist ? Because that's the only reason he would want to date her based on the behaviour she just shows toward him, I mean come on ! All he did was say "hey" for her to flip.
I'm not really surprise that for her there is only 3 categories of guys. If she acts like that all the time, what did she expect ? The only ones who are going to come after her are the ones who are only interested in her body since her "charming" personality will sent all the others running away !

The double standards in this are comical. He’s allowed, by his own admission, to get with every girl that takes his fancy, but Millie is judged as a “skank, slut, whore”?
Women are allowed to get theirs nowadays without anyone looking on them detrimentally.
It’s the dishonesty and disrespect that he shows women that is the issue here, that and the ridiculous, cliched trope that only an untouched virgin can change him.
All this does is form a totally unequal relationship that is doomed to failure. She will constantly feel inadequate and jealous whilst being surrounded by his past fucks and he will be forever looking over her shoulder for the next conquest he believes he was put on the earth to have.

Don’t tell me? She’s the sacrificial virgin sent to teach him the error of his ways? Again.

that ending hurts omg I love them the funeral ahh

No matter how many times I read it, their romance never gets old. Yours is the best Bella/Edward romance I have read place keep writing stories like this. I love your mature Edwarf