|Reviews for White Carpet and Wall Sconces|
| iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Actually i dont know why but the fact that he smokes is just so sexy! i know, crazy! but for me is hell sexy! :D
i really loved this fic! badass Edward is so HOT and sexy! and well, badass :D
| Sabelina chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
What happened with the condom?
| heart of steel chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Holy Edward Cullen that was HOT. I have a friend with a carpeted bathroom and I always thought it was cheesy...now I'll never think of anything else except for this story!
| BellsNWhistles4Edward chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
whew...is it hot in here?
THAT WAS the best I've read so far (for the contest).
| pandz0rz chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I don't think I'll be able to walk into a bathroom without either laughing, or getting dirty thoughts.
Good job :3
| TheCullenCrest chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
That's was hot :D
Please turn it into a story
I am putting it on alert!
| GraceMac chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
| KalliCullen chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
haha i loved it :)
i thought it was really well written, so thank you!
| Samji chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Very Sexy. I like it a lot.
| Ruby-Wednesday chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
ooh, that was really good. very hot and there was something quite real about the way you wrote the characters.
I'd recommend you space out the paragraphs a bit more to make it easier to read, especially where there's dialogue.
| pippapear chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
| justbri chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
| alleybear93 chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
That was amazing!
I dont think it should just be a one shot...I really wouldnt mind if you turned it into a story!
Please im sure alot of people would love to read it you write amazing!