Reviews for White Carpet and Wall Sconces
iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Actually i dont know why but the fact that he smokes is just so sexy! i know, crazy! but for me is hell sexy! :D

i really loved this fic! badass Edward is so HOT and sexy! and well, badass :D

great job!
Sabelina chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
What happened with the condom?
heart of steel chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Holy Edward Cullen that was HOT. I have a friend with a carpeted bathroom and I always thought it was cheesy...now I'll never think of anything else except for this story!
BellsNWhistles4Edward chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
whew...is it hot in here?

THAT WAS the best I've read so far (for the contest).
pandz0rz chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I don't think I'll be able to walk into a bathroom without either laughing, or getting dirty thoughts.

Good job :3
TheCullenCrest chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
That's was hot :D

Please turn it into a story

I am putting it on alert!

(Hint)
GraceMac chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Oh! Nice!
KalliCullen chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
haha i loved it :)

i thought it was really well written, so thank you!
Samji chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Very Sexy. I like it a lot.
Ruby-Wednesday chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
ooh, that was really good. very hot and there was something quite real about the way you wrote the characters.

I'd recommend you space out the paragraphs a bit more to make it easier to read, especially where there's dialogue.
pippapear chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Tasty!

Cheers.
justbri chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Great one-shot!
alleybear93 chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Holy Crap!

That was amazing!

I dont think it should just be a one shot...I really wouldnt mind if you turned it into a story!

Please im sure alot of people would love to read it you write amazing!
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