|Reviews for Hideaway|
| The GamerSwordsman chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Very nice one shot. And um I already knew that Hector was going to die in Fire Emblem 6 because well...I kind of looked up YouTube videos to watch everything (I hope that made sense). Again nice job and well, who's parents do you think is the dark blue haired boy pengis knight? (I know spelled it wrong, but I think you get what I mean)
| CaTigeReptile chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
It's a great view into the mind of a special character. It's interesting that she fluctuates between being proud of the fact that she's a woman and being almost ashamed of it (trying to hide it behind her armor.)
The most off-putting thing was "Women also get raped everyday, if they aren't careful." That was really random. I understand that you wanted to put it in, but the way it was done was like "P.S." or "by the way." Or maybe it's the previous sentence that's in the wrong place. . .
I dunno, but it's awesome that you wrote a story about her. Too bad she's such a terrible unit! (Though I'm going to use her this next playthrough of mine)