Reviews for Bella and the Beast
Guest chapter 6 . 4/28
OK, I know this is a fairy tale, but still you could have been a bit more original. This story is almost a word for word copy of beauty and the beast. Even then, you haven't paid much attention to detail. First, you set the time period as modern, what with all the phones and cars. Then you go ahead and put Edward in the medieval era. You seem to forget that he is only nineteen years old and he's not immortal either. Because you said that the rose will bloom until he's nineteen years old and then start to wilt. Obviously that won't happen if he's immortal. So you need to bridge the time gap. Second, if the inanimate objects are his family why the hell are they calling him master? Those are only few of the mistakes that I've noticed which I feel you need to fix. That will make your story more original and more mature.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/28
OK, I know this is a fairy tale, but still you could have been a bit more original. This story is almost a word for word copy of beauty and the beast. Even then, you haven't paid much attention to detail. First, you set the time period as modern, what with all the phones and cars. Then you go ahead and put Edward in the medieval era. You seem to forget that he is only nineteen years old and he's not immortal either. Because you said that the rose will bloom until he's nineteen years old and then start to wilt. Obviously that won't happen if he's immortal. So you need to bri
Motherof8 chapter 14 . 2/27/2015
Aww, that was so sweet. Thanks.
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Motherof8 chapter 11 . 2/27/2015
What a horrible jacob
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 2/27/2015
Poor edward
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 2/27/2015
Sweet
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 2/27/2015
good story
perpetually chapter 14 . 5/23/2014
Great story!
Wolfgirl706 chapter 14 . 2/17/2014
awwww. I love it.
sanutazwrites chapter 15 . 10/19/2013
I would love to read this one too!
sanutazwrites chapter 14 . 10/19/2013
I just loved this story so much!
Its was more perfect because of the characters Edward and Bella :)
I totally enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!
meee chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Jacob is Gaston LOL!
Guest chapter 14 . 8/6/2012
LOVE IT!
gleefan2009 chapter 15 . 6/11/2012
loved the story please write more i loved it
BeckaR chapter 15 . 6/7/2012
Awesome story really loved it
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