Reviews for Watch You Breathe
UnLike Us chapter 4 . 1/25/2016
Hi there, I'm a new reader. Just wanted to say that I rely enjoyed you fic!
bbb136 chapter 4 . 7/25/2010
Damn you write very well ;)
Dark Goddess of Chaos chapter 4 . 8/11/2009
wow. deep
farfromdaylight chapter 4 . 6/7/2007
... -notices that "next" button- Oh. There was more.

Not enough though. Want more. Want the aftermath. ;-;

E... *swoons happily* So good...
farfromdaylight chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
Two perspectives, two versions, two people angsting.

Utterly brilliant.

Wish there was more.
GreenEyedFloozy-BackInBusiness chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
This is so amazing. It's beautiful, sad, and perfectly worded.
Your.Suicide.Note chapter 2 . 8/22/2006
Wow, yet again, another cool chapter. Though... I gotta say, imagining Cid OR Vincent cryin' is pretty tough. Oh well, it fit's into this fanfic, so I think s' still cool. _
Your.Suicide.Note chapter 1 . 8/22/2006


I really like this story! And I love the fact that it's really long, and this is only the first chapter. I think you got a lot of Vincent's emotions explained, or at least how you think he feels about certain aspects and... wow. It was (and is) really, REALLY good.
AnimeWhore666DOOM chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
oh my freakin god! could that have been any more dramatic?jesus christ! i gotta go watch something happy now...god. but i do want to know what happens next so, please finish the story!.
scarlettHuntress chapter 4 . 5/6/2006
wow. this is breathtaking... but.. umm.. is it 'dead'?
Kylie-Chan chapter 4 . 6/17/2005
Agh! This was so GOOD! But I'd expect noting less from you Zarla. God your so good at catching the characters personalities. I love how at first Vin seems to be having the problems, then it slowly goes over to Cid. This chapter was so sad! BUT I DIDN'T CRY! That much anyway...*sniff* Keep up the good work Zarla-san, and please update soon!
Mizurio chapter 4 . 5/16/2005
Oh the agony...*sniff* so sad, but you must let the show go on...WRITE MORE PLEASE!
LC chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
*dries her tears*

Vinny... poor, poor Vinny... I love this pairing, and this is one of the best Vin/Cid fics I've ever read!
Makoredeyes chapter 4 . 8/24/2004
Wow... this... was utterly heartbreaking. *Cries* Beautiful, but heartbreaking.

...makes me want to kill someone on Cid's behalf. _ Am I sick?

Anyway... wow... Is there more to this fic, or is it done? Keep it going! (email me?)

This... yeah. I'm stunned by it. Love it. Breaks my heart, but I love it. (agnst monkey .
Lora Helen chapter 4 . 6/3/2003
...Wow, how the hell did you write that, it was done so well. I am glad Vin was able to wake him up, it would have been horrid if he haddnt.

Are you going to update soo? I really hop so! This is a reall good fic and i hope to see more very soon.

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