|Reviews for Watch You Breathe|
| bbb136 chapter 4 . 7/25/2010
Damn you write very well ;)
| Dark Goddess of Chaos chapter 4 . 8/11/2009
| farfromdaylight chapter 4 . 6/7/2007
... -notices that "next" button- Oh. There was more.
Not enough though. Want more. Want the aftermath. ;-;
E... *swoons happily* So good...
| farfromdaylight chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
Two perspectives, two versions, two people angsting.
Wish there was more.
| GreenEyedFloozy-BackInBusiness chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
This is so amazing. It's beautiful, sad, and perfectly worded.
| Your.Suicide.Note chapter 2 . 8/22/2006
Wow, yet again, another cool chapter. Though... I gotta say, imagining Cid OR Vincent cryin' is pretty tough. Oh well, it fit's into this fanfic, so I think s' still cool. _
| Your.Suicide.Note chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
I really like this story! And I love the fact that it's really long, and this is only the first chapter. I think you got a lot of Vincent's emotions explained, or at least how you think he feels about certain aspects and... wow. It was (and is) really, REALLY good.
| AnimeWhore666DOOM chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
oh my freakin god! could that have been any more dramatic?jesus christ! i gotta go watch something happy now...god. but i do want to know what happens next so, please finish the story!.
| scarlettHuntress chapter 4 . 5/6/2006
wow. this is breathtaking... but.. umm.. is it 'dead'?
| Kylie-Chan chapter 4 . 6/17/2005
Agh! This was so GOOD! But I'd expect noting less from you Zarla. God your so good at catching the characters personalities. I love how at first Vin seems to be having the problems, then it slowly goes over to Cid. This chapter was so sad! BUT I DIDN'T CRY! That much anyway...*sniff* Keep up the good work Zarla-san, and please update soon!
| Mizurio chapter 4 . 5/16/2005
Oh the agony...*sniff* so sad, but you must let the show go on...WRITE MORE PLEASE!
| LC chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
*dries her tears*
Vinny... poor, poor Vinny... I love this pairing, and this is one of the best Vin/Cid fics I've ever read!
| Mako Red Eyes chapter 4 . 8/24/2004
Wow... this... was utterly heartbreaking. *Cries* Beautiful, but heartbreaking.
...makes me want to kill someone on Cid's behalf. _ Am I sick?
Anyway... wow... Is there more to this fic, or is it done? Keep it going! (email me?)
This... yeah. I'm stunned by it. Love it. Breaks my heart, but I love it. (agnst monkey .
| Lora Helen chapter 4 . 6/3/2003
...Wow, how the hell did you write that, it was done so well. I am glad Vin was able to wake him up, it would have been horrid if he haddnt.
Are you going to update soo? I really hop so! This is a reall good fic and i hope to see more very soon.
| Lora Helen chapter 3 . 6/3/2003
Lol, i liked the ending, "Get bent Strief" But once again that was a very deep chapter, this is a really well written fic