Reviews for Sometimes Trouble
ClosetedOtakus24 chapter 1 . 1/9
This is possibly the most kinky/F***ED up lemon I may ever read on this sight.…AND I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
I completly loved it you should continue this story.
V chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
NaLuforever48 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
That's weird
Carmen chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Haha what a nice lemon. I would totally do the same if I was Maka! Loool. Nice one shot
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
You should make a sequal
Awsomeness chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
This was really good I loved it .you should make a part two that will finish what happened.
Awsomness chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
You should make a sequal
rawr chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
You are a Percy Jackson fan I can tell
somalover chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
cruel to leave it at that and not make another chapter. loved it
Roy Binns chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
You should continue this lemon
Twin-Lupus chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Excellent job! I love the snippets we get about how Soul is affected too. Great job!
Brennason chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Holy crap that was hot... I never thought of using Soul THAT way
nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
T-...that's it? *lip quivers while giving puppy dog eyes* aw...
YourPoison chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
I honestly think this was a bit rushed. Could have turned this into something, more. Like an Aftermath, or an extended Prologue, but it is your choice. Artistic Licence, only in a writer sort of way.

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