Reviews for Harry Potter Mercenary |
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![]() ![]() ![]() its quite good, tho a bit unfinished ending with dum bully door |
![]() ![]() Thanks! |
![]() ![]() Set in America. Eyeroll |
![]() ![]() This feels incomplete. We needed dumble ass whoopin. We need to see dumbledore served with revenge. And the reactions on learning there were no more gold in potter and black vaults |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daphne in string bikini. Goddamn, why fanfics don't have pictures... |
![]() ![]() Very good story. I'm loking forward fo a part 2... Harry VS Dum as a door. Nuff said ! |
![]() ![]() I love this story. More ! More ! Excelsior ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How can the goblins hand over harry's vaults without losing all trust with their other clients? |
![]() ![]() He lived with his parents for 15 months not 18 months |
![]() ![]() never mind, there is a sequel :p |
![]() ![]() no revenge for dumbledore or hermione? disapointing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This should have been many chapters and each one tormenting Dumbledore, Hermione, Percy, the ministry and all the death eaters! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So hysterically fun happenings here |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First-person was a little jarring at first, but not for long. While this could have been fun to see it as a longer story, i really enjoyed it as is. Well done and thanks for sharing! |