|Reviews for Harry Potter Mercenary|
| EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 6/2
Sad, dark, but I liked it.
| paulieandgilbert chapter 1 . 5/19
You know, this is such a good story it deserves its own trophy. But then you created your own with Harry's action figures and the " Potter Mark.
" Oh well, the best I can accomplish is to say how much I loved it. It's definitely one of my favorites. The " tongue in cheek-iness "of this is phenomenal and I can't praise it enough. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I know I'll be back to reread it at some point.
| a fan of this chapter 1 . 5/9
I LOVE IT
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
Harry was 15 months when his parents died not 18 months. Duh
| Kaylen.b4444 chapter 1 . 3/16
Interesting plot but to me the ending was unsatisfying
| KoldT chapter 1 . 3/10
Great story. Loved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
Enjoyed your story
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2022
Well, if que ignore your Hermione stupidity the story maybe just bad as it Is just another hay MoRon story.
| N. A. Wennerholm chapter 1 . 10/11/2022
With all the crimes Albus and the rest of Wizarding Britain committed against Harry and his parents and his godfather. So as a result I would take away their freedom and their magic and their food. So Harry did what he needed to. And U would tell Albus she is now and forever forbidden to use light and dark to describe good from evil. Albus thinks he is good but all of his actions and decisions say otherwise. He has done nothing but betrays people left and right. The Potters is a big one. I would like to see all of the ghosts declare Albus guilty of treason especially when you consider what was revealed with the Potters marrying into the Royal Family at sine point. It was revealed that in the past many of the MagIcals are guilty of treason and sedition and that it runs in families I wonder how many times so-called light wizards have betrayed their so-called fellow light wizards and witches. And I would have liked to see an epilogue showing different ones that have been done away with it when it comes to the Afterlife with their sentences. And Albus is given a sneak peek into his punishment for what he did to Harry and his betrayal of the Potters and Sirius and The Tonks and The Lupins. And quite frankly Harry shouldn't have been using sass and sarcasm. Instead, he should have used blunt harsh truth as to what he sees and that too many innocents have died no thanks to him and his lies manipulations, and faults reasoning. and its total lack of understanding of true morals and ethics. Albus is no better than Riddle.
| Dana Michelle Cooper chapter 1 . 8/24/2022
Awesome where Malfoy was put
| smartisha101 chapter 1 . 8/11/2022
honestly, I don't know why Harry is surprised. Dumbledore has literally been screwing him over at every turn.
| NoSkill4me chapter 1 . 8/10/2022
I liked the story very much, although I wish you had handled the Dumbledore situation differently (more violently). But then it wouldn't have been such a nice hattrick.
Anyways, well done.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2022
Hmm Greengrass as Unspeakable imperious'ing freely, so why couldn't they manage it out of the threat of Voldmort? And Potter didn't care about someone trying to bend his will even though he knew it wasn't personal.
"She said if you could think about this logically, you'd understand and agree to do this."
logical thinking may get to whatever lengths and to whatever actions without considering any moral aspect... Granger though should've had morals other than just the rules in her head. Cuz if she thinks just logically then the rules may start to fade away as well due to them being somewhat speculative.
This fic clearly shows not to trust those who are in power.
| SoSoLazy chapter 1 . 7/14/2022
Nice one. I want Dumbles dead
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2022
The only other dark lord Dumbledore is you!