Reviews for Surviving
librarymouse chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Wow. That was good. I thought she was going to kill him for sure.
Goomba chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
A little out but still a nice piece, well written. Overall I think it's best this way, thank you.

Cheers Jen
JFreak1334 chapter 1 . 9/18/2008

I seriously thought she was going to kill him! :O

Wow! You had me convinced! O.O

Incredibly strong piece.

Keep up the phenomenal work! :D :D :D :D :D

macisgate chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
That was so good! You kept me guessing and on the edge of my seat. Nice!
Leighawen chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
That was great. I totaly thought it was a real gun. I really liked the way you wrote Sam. Good Job! :D
StanaTorv chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
yeah...pete bashing!

:D sam
Raylenth chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Nice story, I've enjoyed reading it. There where a couple of minor spelling errors in it - "She expected that at 300 am," it should be 3.00, not 300.

"then shock registered on his face as he took in the site of her face" It should be sight, not site. Site refers to a location.

Keep it up!