xD NICE chapter vivi, I didn't know you updated! P

Nicely written! The scenes were all nicely done. Klan is love.

I cannot wait for the next installment. X3

Given the events of the final episodes, I thought you did an admirable job of trying to stay true to the events while keeping with the plot you laid out in the first chapter. There were definitely moments where there was just a little too much shoujo and some OOC, but the overall feeling was there and remained intact.

I like the idea of SkullFaerie and think you should contribute as well. I didn't see your name on the list, but it would be great to see what all of you guys can pool together and come up with.

After reading this chapter I have only two words to say. MORE PLEASE !

This was a great chapter. It flowed very nicely and entwined with the last episodes.

Hehe, I loved the lunch scene at the last. XD

I'm looking forward to the next deculture. 8D

Wonderful fic. *adds to faves* Alto was a little off, but mostly in a good way. The interaction between the two main characters was intense, playful and dramatic at the same time. I wish there were many more Alto/Sheryl fics like this. Kudos.

FINALLY! A Alto/Sheryl worth reading! Hope there is more to come!

There really isn't enough MF fanfiction, let alone ones about Alto and Sheryl. I liked your characterization and it fit in nicely in the timeline. With so much still unknown about the status of the love triangle, you managed to solve it appropriately. You should definitely write more.

nice first chapter, i really love this pairing!

Not bad. I can't wait for the next chapter !