|Reviews for Marui's Dream|
| animangadeek0624 chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
please update sooner... please... please... please...
i'm a fantasy geek for all i care...
and i want to see those evil faeries (is the spelling right?) get punched and kicked! i want them to suffer -to torture them!
and i want rikkai's victory (just love rikkai)
| anonymus-critic chapter 5 . 10/15/2010
OK, I don't want to be mean, but this is the worst story I have ever read.
First of all, punctuation. I hate it when people forget to put periods at the end of sentences or dialogue. It should look like this "Dialogue."
Second of all, the plot. I wanted to laugh my face off at the stupidity. I took one look at your story, and thne I thought to myself, "I'd rather go babysit my neighbor's unhandsome, rude, and mean dog than read this again." The plot is the most stupidest thing I have ever heard of, and I am pleased to say that it will reamain that way.
Third of all, I just cannot believe the cliche-ness of this story! Seriously, 'faeries'? How stupid. When I tried to show my brother what was a bad story, I used your story as a example. He has a project for school.
Fourth of all, I mean, you try to make it so epic win and awesome and stuff, but I seriously want to convince you to stop, because it's seriously not working. It's NOT working.
Fifth of all, I hate how you describe Hyoutei and the other people. I mean, even though you try to make Marui sound so awesome and matyr-ish, you just make him sound like the most stupid humain being on earth. You also try to exagerate the pairings, but you're exaggerating it WAY too much. I mean, Atobe gave up on jailing Marui and Niou just because JIROU said so? I was like, "Ya! In your face, Marui!" but then you dissapointed me.
I mean, can't Atobe totally know that Jirou is trying to hit on Marui? Gosh, how stupid.
This fic is the MOST STUPID and MOST BORING and MOST FAIL story in all of . Please take it down, it's burning my eyes with it's unbelievable stupidness.
I also cannot believe that people even reviewed for you. You like, totally don't deserve it. But sigh, I guess it's up to other people if they want to have such bad taste.
No, you don't have to be sorry it sucks. Because it is, except nobody feels like pointing it out. That's why I'm doing that.
| Marui Bunta chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
can you write more about this story marui's dream? its so cool hope u can wirte more
| evigt skriftligt chapter 5 . 7/7/2009
can't wait for more update soon desu!
| rapturousdreams chapter 3 . 10/2/2008
it's great, nya!
ooh Hyotei i wonder what would happen...hmm... *whacks head to think*
can't wait for the next chapter
| rapturousdreams chapter 2 . 9/30/2008
yeay it's updated!
this is awesome
though i can't imagine Niou pouting at Marui...but it's still good, nya
ok. i take it back. i can imagine Niou pouting but not at Marui. there. much better. XD
| evigt skriftligt chapter 2 . 9/28/2008
| Himitsu Love chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
hihi. nice story there. but by the way, I doubt yr story is complete yet so try and change the status back to incomplete please. I really enjoyed yr story. update soon. I will be looking forward to it.
| rapturousdreams chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
ooh I wonder what would happen next
Can't wait to read the next chapters.