|Reviews for Chaos Magic|
| 666snoopy chapter 1 . 11/11/2020
| santa chapter 1 . 12/19/2019
ppls make a fanfiction about interesting pls update
| nozomi-NN-chan chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
OMG this story was completely amazing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
Nice story. But I really have to say you don't know a lot about wars.
Wars are bad things, but there will always be a reason for war, and often none of the sides are singaly wholly responsible, so what Naruto said was a little unconvincing. All wars start because of a failed negotiation, so it was a little hard to imagine how Sasuke managed to use force to make them reach an agreement... but I'd rather not read about this so nevermind.
There's a few times when I felt too uncomfortable to read anymore, but I sort of endured a bit.
I have a mild symptom of love-mysophobia, can't stand Naruto loving someone beforehand. It seemed to me that a big reason why Naruto was attracted to Sasuke was because he was lonely, and Sasuke was his only option, and Sasuke had the "life" that he really wanted... Then if the person who summoned Naruto was someone else, would Naruto be automatically attracted to them as well?
And the way that Naruto told Sasuke to "take his place", in a split second I was almost convinced that Naruto didn't love Sasuke for Sasuke at all.
I can't stand this... I have mental mysophobia... But it was a good setting so I ignored it.
If the war was started because Sasuke's nation faced an external threat, then Sasuke doesn't have to stop the war to have the heart of gold. And based on my understanding, Sasuke really respected his father and loved his clan. That's why he would try to kill Itachi, who slaughtered them, and destroy Konoha, which put his clan under surveillance and rejected them, he tried to view his family as victims, and protect them. Which made Sasuke a person pretty willing to sacrifice. Confronting with terrible truth, some people can choose to forget or ignore, but some people can only face the calls of the murdered, and carry their responsibilities on their shoulders. Sasuke was always a person willing to sacrifice himself in my eyes.
I get really awkward when people say others are mean. because based on categorical imperative, the action won't be morally correct. But anyway that was not important.
It was a good story. Sometimes I feel slighly uncomfortable, but I ignored them to continue reading because it's worth it. I like the setting.
| Jaricchi chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
Huba huba huba.
This was beautifully written. I enjoy the intricacies of the royal clan and how seductive Naruto can be. If I was a much better artist, I'd love to draw them out. But alas, maybe I can get a friend to do it. But for now, I really just want to congratulate you on this beautiful piece of work. :D
| jj chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
re read still love great job
| P. Cythera chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
Omg loved it :)
| jupimako chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
| ilyena damodred chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
| WolfieLiz chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
| jj chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
| Tanoha chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Really loved this story. Wish I'd seen more of it.
| FreakyFee94 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Wow, perfect! I LOVE IT! *_*
| falsedfaith691 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
I love this one shot it's so fluffy and cute! Would it be ignorant/insensitive of me to ask for like a sequel or like instead of a one shot make it into a two shot lol.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2013