another great fic from you! i think im falling for ur stories! so definetly, a new favorite one!
thanks for this one :)

That was a long one. But so beautiful! I loved everything about it, from Sasuke's perspective, to the plot, the relationship between them, even the lack of sex. Omg who says that? I do! I think it makes the story more touching.

is so nice to finally find works worth reading. thanks for this.

Great Story! Love IT. ;3

You wrote a wonderful story! Can you make it into a story and not as a one shot?

thanks :)

...this cant be rated M nothing in her was even close to rated M...But i do admit it was a amazing story...But REALLY NO LEMON MAN THATS A BUZZ KILL!

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cute! love the end with the note saying "You belong to me" .

Oh... *_* Fantastic! Awesome!

Awww that was cute

Awesome one-shot! The energy, and imagery you used were awesome. Naruto's energy was intense and sexy _

I also liked plot and feel of the fic.

One of my favourites of your fics ( :

Others were really good too though! Planning on finishing more of them?

Beautiful story!

i wonder if you'll be making a sequel of i guess even without a sequel this story is already so good on it's own! idon't mind if there's no sequel.

the ending is fabulous with a hint of suspense which is awesome. i love this story it's great. my favorite(:

at least at the beginning Sasuke is thinking carefully before jumping head first into 's smart. it's sad how the father is pushing him to do such thing. go Sasuke for making a bad ass room for the spell to work. well done on how he brought the fox over to their world. i want to smack his father so much of being a butt head. things are not always what they seem to be shake head. i bet the fox is just a powerful yet the father doesn't see it. sigh. uh the fox turn human in front of Sasuke but not the others i wonder why. uh only Sasuke can see Naruto then sucky for a little bit. lol they can see a cute little fox and a very powerful one too. lol poor Sasuke. i love how you are writing Naruto here being a bad ass like and funny at the same time along with being sexy. yay for Itachi not wanting war. yay the war has ended on a good note. whaaaaaaaaaaaa there should be a squeal to this with them being together. i love this story and it was well written. keep up the good work and do your best.