Great story, but the lemon could of done with much more detail, and you really should make a sequel. It was much too short.

I really love this story though dunno if I reviewed so here I am

so anyway good work :D

whoa! you're an amazing story writer! you have such a great imagination!

So good! I love how flirtatious Naruto is .

This story was enchanting. It Is very good, and leaves the reader with a satisfied.

Thanks for writing it!

:)

oh wow i loved this naruto is so possessive I like! And I love how powerful sasuke is!

I TOTALLY LOVE IT is a great story

G.L.

sorry bad at this

*melts* Lovely.

oh wow...that was hot...lol

personally, i dont like regular naruto as being top, but demon naruto made it interesting.

i also like how you made sasuke a magi...XD very interesting concept, and he and itachi actually got along! lol

wonderfully done *claps for u*

aw

i LOVED this sotry

so hot... but also had a plot

really good

r u going 2 do a sequel whewree naruto claims sasuke?

Please continue with this storyline...its brilliant!

plz-is there a sequel?

(u) i really enjoyed reading this and love it

thank youu

Continue. In my mind you have the gift of fluid writing. This Talent is granted to the very few who have the presence of mind to enhance their abilities with passion and ignorance of anything else. I leave this parting gift to you and your imagery. Do with it what you will.

I awake in the infinite dream,

Dream of Dreams, the dark.

Darkness take me under wing,

And in your cloak invite me.

Unto the Halls of Lasting,

Until the Ending of Days,

Before the night is murdered by dawn,

Hold to me always, always.

We are kin like none have been,

Ever, never before.

But lack the sight the masses might,

And lead us to the Reaper's door.

Steady atop the waste of the woods,

Coddled in black embrace.

Slowly the embers like stars fall among us,

Burning us always, always.

Ashes, Ashes in the wind,

Howling through the sky.

Twined together now forever,

What remains of you and I.

Set still the wildfrost running,

Along rivers and mountains and plains.

Your smoking breath becomes silent,

Sleep with me always, always.

OMG...it felt like i was really there, ur really gd at this, plz write another *Hugs*