Reviews for Wicked Little Spell
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Graphic is definitely not necessary. It was a sweet, tender and loving encounter.
blb1000 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I liked it. Good pacing & sexy enough.
bouncy 72 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Good story...sigh..y can't I have Edward deliver me some flowers like that
No1Longer1using1account chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
FRAKIN LOVE It!)
R.A. Byers chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
lol yes not as graphic as some others but love it all the same! keep going!
Ivylynn chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Eh. It was o.k it kinda did go kind of fast. One shots are allowed to be longer than that you know. You might not be trying to hear this but you probably won't make it as a writer, I swear I'm not a hater or anything I'm just telling it as it not to say you're not a really, umm, good writer but you have to be great.
Stup1D-sk00LyarD-CRUSH chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
It was sweet, it doesn't matter that it isn't as graphic as most because it was well written and the story was awesome!
MyLion.MyLamb chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
No, it wasn't graphic, but I thought it was very good.

I thought it was so sweet the way you wrote it. The simplicity of it all was perfect and fit the story wonderfully. Any other way would have ruined it.

Awesome first lemon,

KUDOS 2 YOU!

Charley
Kaliebag chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Umm...they already love each other? Seriously?
literatefanatic27 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Tastefully done, others can too graphic while this one was pleasantly perfect. Plus I always like a bit of banter between my characters in these situations.
Atlaxxxx chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Well i'm pretty sure that u know u should use more detail, so i'm not gonna talk any more about it.

It was pretty sweet as far as loving sex goes. lol

I do have one question though...if Bella is so mad at James then why does she have a picture of James and her together out where people can see it? If I were her I would have - at the very least - burned it. That's my only question. The story was very good as far as first lemons go though. Very nice. Keep Writing!

TwilightBorn
APlethoraOfGreatness chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
This was good. I put my first lemon in this contest too. People were saying that it was TOO graphic. Haha. Though, you did a really good job for your first time. I liked the plot. Though i have to admit, I didn't see James coming. I was expecting Jasper or sumthin. Ya know?

Well, PM me if you wanna talk sometime!

'sEdward
Tatarata chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
They said 'I love you' too quickly, but it was good
littleSinsandSadlines chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
aww it was very cute! andno worries im trying to write my first lemon too... not workin out so well... hahaha
MissRe chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Aw... it was a great oneshot. You did an awesome job.
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