Reviews for A Convenient Arrangement
TubaPrincess chapter 4 . 10/16/2008
Aww.. this is so cute! I love the fighting.. and Ronon thinking he's all that. He has a lot to learn :)
bailey1ak chapter 4 . 10/14/2008
Having them spar was brillant! I enjoyed reading about that part. They are a great couple.
Alexiel974 chapter 4 . 10/13/2008
hahaha, poor Ronon... one day, he will win...

I love the way he thought about "pulverizing the poor girl"! SO funny with the rest of the story... Teyla, the dangerous feline kicked his ass, good job!

Story is becoming really interresting (no that it wasn't...), I can't wait to read the next chapter...
Bunnylass chapter 4 . 10/13/2008
HA! Indeed :D

They are just so typically teenagers. Up and down, their emotions and behaviour all over the place; you got it in one :D And that sparring match...

Oh it's ON now :) Hehe. Come on Ronon, I'm sure you can beat her once :)

Thanks for updating, I love how this is progressing :D
TheWelcomeStranger chapter 4 . 10/12/2008
That was fantastic! Teyla is such a little brat and Ronon is perfect. I'm glad Teyla go to have fun before she becomes the leader- if this turns out like the canon, that is. What are the dads' plotting?
Lazaro chapter 3 . 10/6/2008 cute that they despise each can't wait for the next update!
TheWelcomeStranger chapter 3 . 10/5/2008
Please update soon?
Alexiel974 chapter 3 . 10/2/2008
yes, now they are friends... that's a beginning... and this moment was nicely written! I like the way she try to push him out of the tree! that is fun...

Oh! and please, don't be sorry for the time it takes you to update, you really have nothing to apologize for!

thank you this nice fic...
Bunnylass chapter 3 . 10/2/2008

I'm really enjoying this story! Its different and totally brilliant :D Their sulkiness, reluctance, EVERYTHING is just so different from them in the show, it's hard NOT to get sucked in :)

Its interesting to read their personalities now, to when they're older :) You got Teyla spot on. Rebellious as a teen, but mellow as an adult :) Its wicked!

Thanks for updating, looking forward, as always to more :)
bailey1ak chapter 3 . 10/1/2008
Already seeing the tracker in Ronon coming out. The kids had a great idea and maybe in the trying to get along they will find out that they do admire each other. Ronon already admires Teyla's bravery in running and hiding when she heard the news.
bailey1ak chapter 2 . 9/29/2008
A great follow-up chapter with the independent young Teyla. Looking forward to seeing Ronon's POV and what transpires to change their minds about each other.
bailey1ak chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
A fun start to the story. An arranged marriage, that ought to go over well with these two head-strong individuals.
Bunnylass chapter 2 . 9/29/2008
Oh, I'm sorry its taken me so long to find this. But I am so glad I did! :)

Teyla's stormy confrontation with her father, had teenage angst written all over it, lol. I can understand her anger and frustration at having to marry someone she don't know; but it was still amusing to read.

I can't wait to read the next bit! Who's gonna get her out the tree and how! Hehe.

Thanks! :)
Alexiel974 chapter 2 . 9/28/2008
Wow ! can't say that young Teyla lack of character !

I can't wait until the next update (but, I will, don't worry! and let me tell you, the wait for you to update is ALWAYS worth it)

Thank you for sharing this nice story! :)
Alexiel974 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
It's the first time I read a fic with little Teyla and Ronon... Written by you it will be great, I'm sure ! the beginning is great, so...

thank you. :)
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