Reviews for Well This Is
Tearlit chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
You did very well with the characterization and the speech of Dexter. I like how you turned the prompt into a miniature study of human expectations and norms.

Great job!

~Tearlit
yayme2012 chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Uh...

One major issue I had was you kept switching tenses.