Reviews for In a World Without You
Sugarplumplum chapter 5 . 7/24/2011
Continue it has really good potential on ur part and ur readers will love if u continue as well as myself
Vamps-babyx chapter 5 . 3/22/2010
Hey really good chapter.

And Concrete Angel isnt by Mariah Carey.

Its by Martina Mcbride
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 5 . 9/13/2009
are you CRAZY! UPDATE like right NOW!

AH! its so good!

i need to hear the next part! its one of my fav. scences!
Padfoot-Moony-Pronglet chapter 4 . 7/31/2009
in italy shdnt they speak italian? jst wondering... btw ur real gd at doin edwards pov P
SecretlyAlice chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Finally someone with skill! This is awesome! you really understood how much pain Edward was in...
future.mrs.vampire.13 chapter 5 . 5/21/2009
I really enjoyed this, and I would definately like to see it continued.

His thoughts of seeing her alive again,

what he was thinking on the plane home..

Those first few days when they are back, when she's consistantly thinking he's gone..

I would definately like to read something along those lines.

This story is just too good to stop.

Millions of Kudos!
future.mrs.vampire.13 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
This was good. Very good.

I didn't recognize the little girl at all.

But now I'm thinking that it's Renesmee.

Hm. Or a Italian Renesmee.


Good story.

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future.mrs.vampire.13 chapter 3 . 5/21/2009
You are seriously pretty phenomenol.

I really enjoy reading your writing,

even though the chapters are quite short.

You are fantastic!

You really capture my idea of how Edwards' mind works.

I think that if Stephenie wrote all the books in Edwards POV it would be similar to this.

Millions of kudos!
future.mrs.vampire.13 chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
I'm definately liking this story.

I think that you have exceptional talent as an author.

I like the choice of words that you use.

And the structure of your story.

Even though this is angsty and sad, I enjoyed it.

I look forward to finishing it!

future.mrs.vampire.13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
I've always wondered what was going through Eddie's mind during this part.

I read over your profile, and I really enjoyed it.

I definately respect that you like to keep true to the books.

I do too, I think that it's showing some sort of disrespect to Stephenie by construing such different things.

Anyhow, I look forward to finishing this story.

Even if it isn't written by Stepehenie herself, I think I'll enjoy it!
Lady Marianne chapter 5 . 1/25/2009
You MUST continue this. No doubt about it. Leavin the story here -although we all know the end- would be simply cruel. Hahaha.

I really, really, really like this. Like I said before (on the other website where you write), I love New Moon. My favourite part is -without a doubt- Italy. And I simply love reading Edward's point of view on it. And this is certainly one of the best I've read so far.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter(s).
team edward chapter 5 . 1/23/2009
no! no no no no no way are you going to stop i love it you cant stop now of al places please please please keep going
xxxSethKisaraxxx chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
Continue on! I love how you wrote Edward's feelings
RandomPersonOfDoom chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Honestly, I think you could go anyway with this fic. You could keep going or you could leave it the way it is and i would still completely kick ass! :)
squeaker19450 chapter 3 . 1/16/2009
good job
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