Reviews for Aspirations
Sheelf21 chapter 55 . 5/17
I really liked your story, it was even short. :)
Very original, and with a new leadership in the magical world, very necessary: neither black nor white, but gray, as is real life.
Guest chapter 42 . 5/13
How is it possible that the smug, self-conceited Draco is able to pass tests and nullify protection spells of a higher level than he has, when he has never had any special training? Not even his father, who died so easily, would have managed it, and he has done it with no problem. I think you've made him in that mission more powerful and intelligent, and with a greater knowledge of spells and counterspells than he actually is.
Guest chapter 28 . 5/8
I hope Hermione doesn't get off so easily for all she's done. She willingly decided to keep those tomes of dark magic, and to start and continue studying them and practicing dark magic, despite the warnings, believing in her hubris, that she was too smart to pay the consequences of her actions. And she was already obsessed with Harry and wanting to hurt Ginny long before she came across dark magic. Before she ended up being another Bellatrix Lestrange, she might as well disappear for good. Maybe that would rid Ron of the killing spell she put him under and for which he was still paying.

I'm really liking your story. Original, and having really captured the characters, with their obsessions, their craving to manage others by manipulating them, and all the other traits that characterize them and were overlooked in the books.
raven haired girl chapter 3 . 5/8
foolish trelawney was hilarious
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 36 . 5/1
New guess, it’s Harry, Hermione, and Ginny
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 34 . 5/1
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 32 . 4/30
Again though, Hermione can’t be Downfall unless Harry is like possessing her
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 32 . 4/30
Hermione might be Downfall, though I don’t know how she would have all of Fred and George’s inventions, unless Harry is somehow equipping this alternate personality, or (more likely) it’s Harry or Ginny, I feel Harry is most obvious, because he literally meets ALL the criteria to be him, but it feels a little TOO obvious, but idk maybe it’s him
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 18 . 4/29
This is vaguely annoying in how this entire story works under the assumption that people won’t ever change from who they were from the age of 11, except of course the protagonists
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 10 . 4/29
Bro the Fact that it’s HERMIONE using love potions and GINNY being all up and angry is ironic, like honestly it’s almost always the exact opposite, with it being a Harmony pair and Ginny using a love potion to steal him
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
Holy mother of based an actual goblincaust I fucking kneel
akhiro dragnell chapter 55 . 4/1
puedes hacer un time skip para ver el nuevo imperio
hrbreece chapter 55 . 3/29
Although there is a need for an editor this story was still very well thought out and creative. It was also just the right length for me.
Fellbane chapter 25 . 3/14
A story with a Dark Harry that still uses stunners... At this point, I wanted to see him actually deal with some of his enemies rather than going back to hiding in the shadows. That was a perfect opportunity to kill off some Death Eaters for good yet instead, they will get away again. Disappointing.
Guest chapter 35 . 2/23
Michael Gannon sucked as Dumbledore. Richard Harris on the other hand was exactly what I had pictured for Dumbledore.
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