Reviews for Jareths Desire::
The Eclectic Eccentric chapter 4 . 2/10/2011
I hope you decide to continue with this story... I'm really enjoying it so far.
TheSodaVampire chapter 4 . 9/6/2009
oh that is BULL. you can't just LEAVE it like this! you gotta continue!
RoyalPurpleDragon chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
Awesome chapter my dear! Sorry it took so long for me to review. But just know that it is great and I look forward to finding out exactly what's going on
Kairi's-twin chapter 4 . 11/23/2008
I really like this story so far. Avery is so Kickass! I love it. I Love pix she is so adorable! How is Avery related to sarah? is she even? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

ALANNA
EvilRamen chapter 4 . 11/20/2008
Yay! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
dark soul 1313 chapter 3 . 9/26/2008
lesson 1:

sexy plant women can be very stupid.

lol, love this chapter! can't wait for the next one! :)
RoyalPurpleDragon chapter 3 . 9/25/2008
I really liked the last two chapters. Very well written. I thought Jareth came off as a little harsh in the last one (NOT BEING A FLAMER!) but it was cool to have Avery's friend be tough right back. And I laughed at the end of this chapter. Fantabulous!
DavidB'sBlueJeanGoblinQueen chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Ah yea! Another great chapter I love how you are keeping jareth in char! I love it Love it Love it!
XdarkmoonX chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
you story was awsome, can't wait for the next chapter
futrCSI1490 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Haha, I like this girl! :) And your portrayal of Jareth is very... delicious seems to be only adjective I can think of, hahahah! XD

Lovely chapter, can't wait for more! :)
DavidB'sBlueJeanGoblinQueen chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
I like this chapter I know many people are going to be like this is so mary suish...but don't listen to them. I rather like jareth with an OC apprently people can't seem to understand sarah turned him down in the movie...honestly people. but enough ranting I like it I laughed at a few parts. So Im hooked keep up the wonderful job! I expect more
RoyalPurpleDragon chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Made me laugh and I found it to be in charater. AND I really enjoy that it has an OC rather than Sarah this time round.