Reviews for It's a long story, Mac
Jennaya chapter 5 . 6/12/2016
This is a great light hearted piece.
Julie chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
This is just as funny the second time around. I love it!
Julie chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Oh, this is hilarious!
PippinStrange chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
"What's this about Pete getting mauled by a lion?" BWAHAHAHAHA! That wasn't a crappy chapter it all, it was hilarious...
omg the paper bats... HAHAHA so funny. loved it
PippinStrange chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
Omg this is SO FUNNY. I'm picturing all of this in my head like a real episode... the last lines of the past two chapters are so dang funny. "I'm Batman!" and "I was attacked by a lion!" actually made me laugh out loud. Those squeaky sort of laughs. Imagining Brinkman's face... omg XD
literary1 chapter 5 . 2/23/2013
Hahahahaha! Great story! Thanks :)
Bamboozlepig chapter 5 . 3/24/2010
I just want to say that I really loved this story, whenever I read it, it never fails to make me laugh. Poor Jim, having to take care of a woozy Malloy, who is operating under the impression he's Batman...priceless. Good story!
caseymac42 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
I am an Emergency! fan who also enjoys watching Adam 12. This is my first Adam 12 fiction story that I've read and I really enjoyed it. It sure gave me a good chuckle. Pete was always pretty serious, and it was neat to see a goofier side of him. And I also liked how you made Jim so flustered about how to handle his partner now that he was so loony from the medication. I'll have to read more Adam 12 stories now, I guess. Thanks for a good chuckle. Laura
khollie chapter 5 . 12/17/2008
Great story and I loved the bats at the end! I could just see Wells doing this!
kris chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
. I SERIOUSLY CAN"T STOP LAUGHING! No really, it's hard to type when you're laughing so hard you're crying.
Aussielover chapter 5 . 10/21/2008
Very nice ending. Great touch with the bats and how Wells said it as he walks out. Love to see another story from you soon.
Debbie5 chapter 5 . 10/21/2008
This was such a funny story! I wish you had written out the reaction of Brinkman when Pete told him he got attacked by a lion. The bats in the locker were a nice touch, too! lol
trevorsgm chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
LOVE-LOVE-LOVE- Adam-12! I am always so excited to read a new story. This is a cute one! Poor ol'Pete and Jim "It's just-you know-needles." Hilarious. And schoolmarm, I've read all of your stories on Tac 2 and Continued Patrol. Anymore coming from you? And you, Medicgirl, keep writing. I need more Adam-12.(LOL-Hehehe). In fact, It's 2:45 AM and I am currently watching my Adam-12 DVD. I guess I need to get a life. But PLEASE keep writing, both of you!
Rooster13 chapter 4 . 10/1/2008
I tell ya, there is nothing better than after three days with the Health Department coming home and reading about the boys. I know I keep telling you how well you capture their spirits, but you do! Don't ever stop writting these, you keep a poor administrator happy and then I don't want to play in traffic!
Aussielover chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Thanks for the addition. I love the sympathy by Jean. I do like how you ended the chapter with the call from Mac. Don't quit. I really love a story with a good laugh.
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