|Reviews for Positive Tension|
| Ivy chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
LOL. love it! its so cute. The lemons were really good too. very... uh. entertaining.]
| MinniMuffin chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Great oneshot. Very well written!
| briiziidii chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
it was cute and utterly edward and bella(besides the lemon part)
i would love to see an extention
| Lady DestinyHope chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
omg i LOVE this story n u just have 2 create it into a real story not just a one-shot
| Starshinedown chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Delicious and fun! I'm glad I found this in the C2, and am sad I missed it when you first added it to the contest.
| BEN-Beyond the Elusive Nomads chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I really liked this story. I liked how you made it have a plot, as well as sex.
| babyjames21 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
LOVED IT AWESOME JOB :):o
| sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Perfect. PERRFECT. AMAZING. Oh, my flipping gosh. LOVED IT!
Yeah, that basically wrapped up what I feel about this. Seriously, though. I LOVED it! It was just...wow. I felt so much stuff (mostly, my mind was screaming COLD SHOWER! COLD SHOWER!), and I spazzed...a lot. There was some dry humor, which I love, and awkward turtle situations, which I CRAVE even though I get too awkward-ed out to continue reading for a period of time...ANYWHOO. So, this had basically all the elements that I love to read, and for that, I worship you. ;)
...WOW job on this. I hope you do good in the contest. My entry is now old news...completely blown-out of the water. I thought I might do good, but now I'm not so sure...well, at least I tried.
| Sheeijan chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Aw, that was great! Edward was so sweet and so not arrogant, and kind, and I loved how he put himself out there like that admitting to Bella how he felt. And it was hilarious that he did it in front of Carlisle unwittingly. Loved it!
| hot 101 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Loved it! just amazing!.It was like a whole long story put together in one fantastic one-shot!.I hope tp read more of your great writing soon!.
| Brunettezki chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
That was totally sexy and completely believable! Awesome job! XD
| limona chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Were Edward and Carlisle related? I wasn't sure.
But this was an excellent one-shot. You built it up and even gave them a happily ever after.
| margaritama chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
great story -
| mllesinistre chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Oh wow, you really went all out with this story. I loved every minute of it. Keep up the great work!
| ObsessingOverEdward chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Great one-shot. So I have to know...Who's Denny Crane? Emmett?
Thanks for sharing!