|Reviews for Steven Who?|
| PoetDameron chapter 11 . 9/4
Oh boy, never in my life have I read a fanfic so fast! And I mean it in a good way, since I really sat down and read this obssessively for the past two or three hours! Lovely story with a funny and smart plot, I loved it from start to end :)
| Starlight77 chapter 11 . 8/23
this was too funny and cute with a very satisfying ending. thanks for this!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/9
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/9
Shit's about to go dowwwwwn
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/27
This one is amazing! I read it in one shot and I can truly say, it's one of my top 3 favourite stories! Keep on writing, you have such a great talent!
| bleedingnightingale chapter 4 . 3/3/2015
So I know this story is already finished, but I'm still looking forward to the next chapters. I had a very different idea of what this story was going to be like, and at first, I wasn't sure about this angle. But wow, this is so creative, and I'm happy to be reading it!
| bleedingnightingale chapter 2 . 3/3/2015
"Corpses don't get a vote." I'm not sure why but that line just put me in stitches.
| la muneka chapter 11 . 5/12/2014
Another excellent story. You are a pro at plot twists, you know?
| Funny.Bonez chapter 11 . 8/7/2013
I loved this story! It was so amazingly good! So glad I stumbled upon it.
| Vicky chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
I love this story.
| ChildlikeEmpress chapter 11 . 11/26/2012
That was such a cute story. Bravo.
| DemonicXaliv chapter 2 . 5/18/2012
I was starting to wonder how this could be labelled as a 'Humor' story since through the first chapter it all seemed pretty angsty, but Red's comment at the end to Hyde that "Corpses don't get a vote." was funny as hell.
| MistyMountainHop chapter 11 . 10/9/2010
"Girls like you should come with a manual."
LOL So great. Hyde should have actually said this on the show. It's a clever little line.
"You'd think being knocked up by a petty felon would have some benefits!"
"Petty? I don't think so," Hyde scoffed
Cute exchange. D
I like Hyde's freak out... "take-anywhere phone." Sounds like he's been hanging around Kelso too much. LOL
"Piglets?" Jackie squealed (much like a piglet). "My baby is not a porker! How would she ever overcome the shame of being delivered by a pig's midwife?"
LMAO Oh, this is so not something Jackie would ever want... which is why it's fun.
Of course it's Dr. Roger to the rescue. Nice payoff.
They worked together as one, finding in their crisis a bedrock of trust which, underneath the ultimatums and strippers and well-meaning lies, had always been there just waiting to be discovered.
This is lovely.
"Okay, Jackie, we're almost there," Roger encouraged. "One more good push and we're done."
"That's what you said the last time," Jackie protested, close to weeping. "This is why it would never have worked out between us, Roger. Because you're a lying liar who lies!"
"But, Jackie – "
"I said, liar!"
Great, funny exchange. And a touch of Fez...
"Oh, and by the way, Jackie," Kelso said, "On the subject of you having a boy – burn!"
Nice, Kelso. He would say that, too.
"Why would they want to name the baby after you?"
"Uh - because I'm the first guy Jackie ever did it with, Eric?" Kelso said, rolling his eyes. "Don't you know anything about tradition? Ow! Hyde!"
LMAO You've definitely got Kelso's voice down.
"Withholding a present from me?" Jackie cried. "That's extortion."
LOL For Jackie, so true.
I wish I'd had this feeling of absolute certainty then so we could have avoided all the heartache that came after. But maybe it doesn't work that way – maybe I never would have known what you mean to me until I lost you. And if that's the case then I don't regret what's happened because I know now that I'm never going to let you go again. I just – I couldn't survive it, Jackie."
Another *dies* moment. You do a really nice job of conveying Hyde's feelings for Jackie - and imparting some wisdom, too.
because your happiness is mine as well.
He drew back from his fiancé, looked lovingly into her eyes and said those three special words.
"Good to know."
When I first read that those were the three words he said in response to her stories/vision of their future together, it moved me - and it did again.
This story is such a nice addition to Jackie and Hyde lore. It's entertaining, touching, funny, and a satisfying exploration and resolution to the mess season 8 created.
Again, thank you for writing these stories and for sharing them with us.
| MistyMountainHop chapter 10 . 10/9/2010
"If you keep going at this rate you're going to throw a lip out or sprain your tongues."
LOL Nice images.
"What is there to get? We just want our men to give us enough room to come to terms with all the endless crap they put us through but still be close at hand so we can throw something at them as payback for the said endless crap."
Very good logic, Jackie. :P And such a Jackie thing to say.
Kelso shrugged. "They don't mind me taking time off. Something about how things seem to run smoother without me."
LOL I don't doubt it.
"Do not quibble with me, stunted one"
LMAO "Stunted one" tickles me.
Love that Hyde got himself trapped in the mini castle (and that's where he was having some stash-time).
"Better than a guy who dumped you for a whore. Better than a guy who couldn't even tell you not to go when you asked him for a reason to stay. Better than a guy who said I don't know when you asked for a glimmer of hope about us having a future." Hyde slumped down against the inner castle wall. His sad voice echoed from within the plaster stone walls. "Better than me."
Incredibly sad admission - and definitely something real!Hyde was capable of feeling.
Don't you get it, Jackie? I wanted to be dead – I wanted to kill off that part of me that kept hurting you and just bury it away where it would never do any more damage."
Even sadder. And really shows the depth of his love for her.
Jackie gave a small smile. "I'm not quite there yet."
This response makes the moment more real.
"You're setting me free from a castle. This poetic irony thing is really kicking my ass."
LOL I like this.
"Yeah, well, something always happens to people who say nothing is going to happen."
"You watch too many sit-coms. I'm telling you, aside from these damn clenching pains, I'm totally fine."
"Clenching pains?" Hyde stopped in his tracks.
"Yeah, I've been having them all day," Jackie said. "Like my body is being squeezed in a vice. It comes and goes."
LMAO Terrific. This exchange is adorable.
"Steven, it's not a contraction. From what I've heard, a contraction is a much sharper pain that rips you apart from the inside like OH MOTHER OF GOD!" Jackie yelled, dropping to her knees on the soft grass.
LMAO again... "like that."
Love this chapter (as usual).
| MistyMountainHop chapter 9 . 10/9/2010
"Oh my God," Jackie moaned, burying her head in her hands. "I've been pouring my heart out to a doctor who was looking on me as a mental patient! A nutcase! A rabid, foaming at the mouth, two sandwiches short of a picnic lunatic!"
Aww, poor Jackie! I really feel for her.
"Steven," Jackie repeated in a toneless voice. "Of course he wouldn't want me to know – he never was one to cut short a good burn."
It makes sense that Jackie would think this was a burn.
Kitty is so sweet to let Jackie stay with her, and she would do that, too.
the Abba Tee-shirt that he had forgotten to change out of...
Great image. Really demonstrates Hyde's emotional state.
"It's just like you to take some stupid Jackie notion into your head and think you've got everything all figured out when you don't know – "
I love how the truth finally comes out and this: " whenever you're nearby, I just – know it." is incredibly touching. And Hyde's guilt/grief at the pain he's caused Jackie is very sad.
I also like that even after looking through the shoebox, Jackie doesn't forgive Hyde but is still angry and doubts his intentions over the last five months.
"He was just so detached," Donna explained. "And if you could ever catch him without his sunglasses, there was nothing in his eyes – no life, no energy. I know they say people gamble away their souls in Vegas but with Hyde, I can believe that was more than a saying."
Love this acknowledgment of what season 8 did to Hyde. It wasn't just Jackie who had to mourn him, but all the T7S/zen/Hyde fans, too.
Then she remembered how he was before their lives went to hell – the warmth in his eyes when he looked at her, the way he always found an excuse to make contact with her when they were in the same room, the way he would touch her body when they made love as though she were the most precious thing in the world to him.
So so so touching. Esp. how "he always found an excuse to make contact with her when they were in the same room" - this is one of my (and many fans') favorite things about this relationship.
"You know what that makes you, then? You are the potion!" Donna said with rising excitement.
Bingo! And brilliant!
"I guess you have to weigh up the possibility that he could hurt you in the future against the certainty of what your life and your baby's life will be like without him. Then you have to decide if it is worth the risk."
Terrific response and so true.
Can't wait to see (again) what happens next.