Reviews for Harley and Ivy: Love Night
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9
cool man... Ok sorry I just HAD to make that reference!
Harley Queer chapter 1 . 7/27
The grammar was terrible, I mean you didn't even use quotation marks for the dialogue. The story line was...just no. Also, I don't think you understand how the female body works, women don't just randomly lactate. There are just way too many things wrong with this fic.
Joshua Smith chapter 1 . 7/22
Over all it us a really well written fanfiction. I really liked it and it was the best I have read. Just as a simple review. Also you should fix the spelling a little.
charmandor123 chapter 1 . 7/6
this was just great and good job :p
Damn chapter 1 . 6/30
Damn
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9
How about a follow up? Volume 2?
potato chapter 1 . 5/13
This is weird as fuck...
Yuuki Sutcliff chapter 1 . 5/6
Its Perfect 3
Mari and Ellen chapter 1 . 5/3
At June 28th at smosh games h.q Anthony,Ian,sohinki,lasercorn,joven and Mari was about to meat Ellen page because those comments motherfuckers was asking to have Ellen page in one of there videos she finally arrived at the h.q lasercorn and joven had a chilly that give them gas before she arrived "Ellen meat the smosh members Ian Antony joven sohinki lasercorn flitz and Mari and I'm Wes" said wes lasercorn did a nuclear fart "I was about to play minecraft with lasercorn but no way" said Ellen she went to the office with Mari joven was about to make a I scared the shit out of Mari when joven was under the table the two girls came to the office to play minecraft but joven scared the crap out of Mari and Ellen they fell out of there chairs and kissed each other Mari was shocked and ran joven got all the shit live on camera post it and got 50,000,000,000 views Mari was sorry for the kiss "I'm sorry I didn't mean to do that It was all jovens fault" said Mari "it's okay why because i got a secret that I never told anyone I am a lesbian" said Ellen so they plushed "I'll be in my bedroom" said Mari "ok" said Elle Mari was smeark so Ellen followed Mari. Mari was waiting Ellen smiled and kissed and walked to the bed and make love so hard only for 3 hours joven was talking to the boys about the kiss he got on film so the boys played that lying game that they played a couple weeks ago Ellen and Mari were sweating they got out of bed Ellen bending on her knees "Mari will you be my girlfriend" said Ellen "of course" said Ellen so they did the video and the boys were wondering were these two were for 3 hours "we're just at the showers and getting ready the boys were thinking so Ellen and Mari had a secret realitionship so they were having sex again they took off there clothes,bros and underwear after sex they laid on each other so Ellen went back home Mari visit her every week and still have a secret realitionship.
The End
Spider man fan chapter 1 . 4/17
I Really like the story , I hope you make a sequel
DarkPheonix 666 chapter 1 . 4/2
DAAAAAMN!
xAnimejunkie23x chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
awwwwww that was so cute! well written! loved it!
Hillbill chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Ooh...
Honest chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
This is the most unsexy thing that I've ever read and I read a lot of Stephen King.
Quinn chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Ew. Just Ew.
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