Reviews for Centrefold
lluviabrillante chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
The end is the icing on the cake. Very nice.
BlazeingEcho chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Oh. My. God. I love it!
ButterflyArtist chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
I wish i cud have seen da picture. I MEAN! Funny story love it. The way fullmetal came rushing through the Cornal office he made it seem like it was him who was naked in da picture.

Hope their is a flash back to the poker game nite wit Maes and Roy, Mabe a lemon.
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 12/14/2010

xDDDDDDDDDDD Wow, one of the best things I've ever read~~ :33 Good job! I love how well you captured Maes's calming tone and Roy's different characters in front of Fullmetal and his best friend~3
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Ahahahah! Love it XD especially the ending! *falls off couch laughing*
damncritic chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I love this! Your description of Roy's picture is amazingly vivid. And I was wondering what Ed wanted... nice ending! :)
aeskis chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Oh ... my ... gosh. That last line-my jaw hurts from cracking up! *pokes author accusingly*

Your story Centrefold is really, really funny and well-done. I needed to tell you that before I went on with my day. :)

Keep writing,

Steven Kodaly chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
That was hilarious! Poor Ed is so puzzled - if something is outside his alchemic studies, he really doesn't have much going for him, does he? And Roy and Maes' exchange in the hall was amusing beyond words.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
This was Fantastic!

Thanks for Writting it.

of th T.
bunyipbabe chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
one of the funniest M-Raters I've read in a long time. I love Maes! He's hilarious. And Ed's last line? That one had me rofling like a loon for quite a while...

Anyways, good work! Keep it up.
HoPeLeSsRoMaNtIc-29 chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Hahaha... Poor Roy. But the picture would have been really sexy. I want a copy of that! :P

Hm... I wonder why Ed would want the magazine back. ;)

Nicely written.

Love, Niki
MyDirtyLittleSecret chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
LOL! That was awesome. :D
Spirits.Dawn chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
BAD BAD ED!NAUGHTY BOY!..he deserves some spanking's...*evil grin* get'em pony!/Roy!...I loved the lemon, it was great..I so wish that this happened in the would make me watch the series,particularly the one episode.
RemindsmeofaWestSideStory chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
I adore the fact Ed wanted the Magazine back

Ghost of the Crescent Moon chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Too awesome, that was so funny and the last line just finished it perfectly.
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