Reviews for Ghosts of Arbiter's Grounds
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12
That's... dark. But why kill all the Gerudo? They aren't all evil. Nabooru proves that.
SilverChrysanth chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Somehow I never thought of what could have happened to the Gerudo. But... this makes so much sense. I'm very curious to see what the official story is now.
Lin-Dragon-Dreyer chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
. . . ok. I did not sign up for this emotional telling. . . gah! I'm seriously trying not to cry just imagining this scenario! . . . you did an amazing job in writing this and now I'm wanting to replay LOZ: TP all over again just to re-imagine this scene. . . it's a bit more emotional for me cause I'm currently replaying LOZ: OOT and will soon be heading to the Gerudo Fortress as well. . . thank you for this wonderful story.
wingofpain chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
Well...that's probably whan happens in the game which is kinda sad.
Still, it was well written.
ArcDragon1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
I'm Pretty sure I read this same exact story somewhere else and I commented on it too
TacoKing23 chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
I... don't have words for this one.
Tsakura Rain Gezund chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
You write so beautifully that I could sit here all day. Wonderful. This is a favorite!
Makokam chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Well this was interesting. I don't normally like things like the addition of the good ghosts, but for the sake of this story they were completely justified.
I very much liked Link and Midna's characterizations and reactions to everything.
The only real criticism I have would be to differentiate the flashback from the rest of the story somehow. Perhaps make it all itallic or something.

Very well done.

Makokam out.
smellofthewild chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
That last sentence was like twisting a knife in my heart.
Meavsy chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
It's been years since I played through this part, I don't even remember if I ever beat it before I lost my original copy. When I pick up the the game again I wont be able to think of anything other than this amazing little ficlet.

The reviewer before me was right, it does make make far too much sense.

Amazing story, I absolutely loved it.
Quill and Blade chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
...oh god...I remember reading this one-shot long ago, but could not find it again...but after that first reading, I found I could no longer go through the Arbiter's Grounds without feeling a bit sick, because it makes far too much sense...

And has anyone ever thought about what the name of the place means? "Arbiter's Grounds" - arbitrary - without rime or reason, unrestrained, a whim, random - and the arbitrary slaughter of the entire Gerudo race, for a crime they did not commit...
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
UltraScrub666 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Twilight Okami chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Well, that was quite an interesting concept based on the Arbiter Grounds. But your concept actually works. After all, the prison was built in the Gerudo Desert, and no one knows what happened to the Gerudo. Perhaps the Arbiter Grounds is a remodelled version of the Spirit Temple in OOT? Once again, you have a great depth in the Zelda series :D!
Insane. Certifiably chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
I have chills now. I will never be able to look at Arbiter's Grounds the same ever again.

Looking back through the story, I see the little clues you left throughout, like when the little girl told her sisters to go back to sleep. The little girl was just that last touch that made it all the more chilling and heart-wrenching.

This is the hidden side of Hyrule's history.

Beautifully done.
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