Reviews for Can you save me
JSTEW chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
eck, who would really want to love Lauren?
4everbellaxedward chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
nice!
MrsMcCoy chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
dang! I thought it was another chapter!
simkid chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I like this one! good luck!
tuze chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
i loved it

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my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
not that emo but still hot
cshorte chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
That was frickin HOT!
writeswithcrayons chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Headboard love... reow.

Lmao, I wish this was an actual story instead of a one-shot. Like I'd love to know what happened to Bella in the day and Alice and Emmett shoving her into the room. And of course, what happens afterwards :P
JessMess chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
OMFG!

I want this Edward!

All passion and intensity. Definetly a keeper :P

Well done.
TaleTerror chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Pretty damn hot up against a headboard...GOT THAT RIGHT!

Nice writting.
PurdueLiz chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Oh I love how it was all a setup! Very intense.
barbarito chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Holy Crap Goo! That was incredibly hot! Loved it!
pandz0rz chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Oh! I'd accidently on purpose go to the wrong room too!
FrancisHHr chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Yeah, you got that right... up against the headboard? OMG! So hot!
Kingslee chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Amazing job. I love that you used Lauren and Mike in the story.
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