|Reviews for Can you save me|
| For3ver Immortal chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
That was definitely not emo, haha, quite the opposite actually. Very hott stuff!
| silly bj chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Gabby, I like what you've done with this one shot. Now I think I'll read one of your 'Emo' type stories.
Best of luck with Jwood's contest.
Two thumbs up. *F*I*V*E* Stars.
The sex is always HOTTER in Michigan. Are you a Scorpio by any chance?
| jdsk chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Hooray for hotness! Hot lemonade. :)
| JSTEW chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
eck, who would really want to love Lauren?
| 4everbellaxedward chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
| MrsMcCoy chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
dang! I thought it was another chapter!
| simkid chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I like this one! good luck!
| tuze chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
i loved it
| my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
not that emo but still hot
| cshorte chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
That was frickin HOT!
| writeswithcrayons chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Headboard love... reow.
Lmao, I wish this was an actual story instead of a one-shot. Like I'd love to know what happened to Bella in the day and Alice and Emmett shoving her into the room. And of course, what happens afterwards :P
| JessMess chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I want this Edward!
All passion and intensity. Definetly a keeper :P
| TaleTerror chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Pretty damn hot up against a headboard...GOT THAT RIGHT!
| PurdueLiz chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Oh I love how it was all a setup! Very intense.
| barbarito chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Holy Crap Goo! That was incredibly hot! Loved it!