Reviews for Snapshots of Desire
mllesinistre chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Ugh, you write their sex scenes so damn well! I think I'm going to love the rest of this exercise.

Keep up the great work!
dazzleforever chapter 1 . 9/19/2008

I can't wait for next week to get here so you can have more things in your mind haha !
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Very hot.
darcy13 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
That was spectacular. What a writing exercise! Feel free to share your exercises any time. That snapshot was the perfect blend of physical lust and sensual desire with true loving emotions on top. Exquisitely erotic!
sli723 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
woww...I can't wait to read more! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
WaitingToBeDazzled chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Wow! that was good! i love your writing experiences! lol!
ILoveTopaz011 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Hehe. I liked it. Steamy! Haha! Update soon thought!
Jennmc75 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
There is nothing hotter than Edward saying Mine and Fuck. You always seem to have both somewhere in there beautifully.
psychodancechick89 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
gah, so freaking hot! what I wouldn't give to have Edward talking dirty to me like that! *drools*

And I hope that inspiration for this strikes you often, cause I do love me some sexytime PWP!
bug2001 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Excellent job on this, not just for the lemony goodness, but for the actual writing itself. It was very well written and I loved it. :)
InnerAnomaly chapter 1 . 9/19/2008

can't wait for more! :)
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 9/19/2008

I want to frame this. I want these words and the images I held in my head to be with me at all times. I want them on my bedroom wall, I want them there in the bathroom so I can catch them as I step iout of the shower, I want them in the kitchen, I want to brush my fingers over them as I reach into my handbag to answer my phone, and hanging on my rearview mirror as I check the traffic on my drive to work . . .


This was exquisite. At least SOMEONE is getting sex like this. I am just gonna live vicariously.

Brilliant amazing stuff. Thank you!
remembrtherain chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
please let there be more :)
AutumnDreamer chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Plotless, random sex... I'm in! Did you really think anyone would go, "What's the point?" Really now! Two thumbs up, hot and well written!
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
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