|Reviews for Snapshots of Desire|
| mllesinistre chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Ugh, you write their sex scenes so damn well! I think I'm going to love the rest of this exercise.
Keep up the great work!
| dazzleforever chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I can't wait for next week to get here so you can have more things in your mind haha !
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
| darcy13 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
That was spectacular. What a writing exercise! Feel free to share your exercises any time. That snapshot was the perfect blend of physical lust and sensual desire with true loving emotions on top. Exquisitely erotic!
| sli723 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
woww...I can't wait to read more! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
| WaitingToBeDazzled chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Wow! that was good! i love your writing experiences! lol!
| ILoveTopaz011 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Hehe. I liked it. Steamy! Haha! Update soon thought!
| Jennmc75 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
There is nothing hotter than Edward saying Mine and Fuck. You always seem to have both somewhere in there beautifully.
| psychodancechick89 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
gah, so freaking hot! what I wouldn't give to have Edward talking dirty to me like that! *drools*
And I hope that inspiration for this strikes you often, cause I do love me some sexytime PWP!
| bug2001 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Excellent job on this, not just for the lemony goodness, but for the actual writing itself. It was very well written and I loved it. :)
| InnerAnomaly chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
can't wait for more! :)
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I want to frame this. I want these words and the images I held in my head to be with me at all times. I want them on my bedroom wall, I want them there in the bathroom so I can catch them as I step iout of the shower, I want them in the kitchen, I want to brush my fingers over them as I reach into my handbag to answer my phone, and hanging on my rearview mirror as I check the traffic on my drive to work . . .
This was exquisite. At least SOMEONE is getting sex like this. I am just gonna live vicariously.
Brilliant amazing stuff. Thank you!
| remembrtherain chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
please let there be more :)
| AutumnDreamer chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Plotless, random sex... I'm in! Did you really think anyone would go, "What's the point?" Really now! Two thumbs up, hot and well written!
| rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008