Reviews for Fallen
Lady Ifrit chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Aw, that's sad. A well written, emotive piece in its own subtle way - it certainly moved me!
RedAmaranth chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Very nicely written.

I would have never pictured an empty coffin.

Great twist.
ILoveYouDearly chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Aw. Roy. *Cries*

This was so pretty, so like Riza too. She wouldn't be into long, detailed paragraphs about Roy and his death. This was short and simple, and I think captured Riza's personality well.

The empty coffin, that got me. I would have never thought of that, ever, Roy being lost at war. It seems fitting for him. I loved how you encorporated how Riza knew she'd never see his face again... it's so insanely sad. (

Keep up the great work! Happy writing.