Reviews for He's In My Head |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Swoon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw the ending is so sweet! aww it was awesome :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh please continue! this is amazing, i completely loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! that was a really sweet story! luv xox pixy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute James/Lily fic. I especialy love Sirius and Alice's reactions to everything. Happy Halloween |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it and think you should continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, Kirsten, this-this is just as horrible as you made it sound. Are you crazy? It was very good, I would LOVE to know when you post the new Chapter. Add to faves (author and story) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH! appears to be a promicing story! really good how they fell asleep together and barely even realized! Great job! lol i love it! keep it up, and update soon! :D L.U. animal addictions |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was really awesome, I want to know what will happen when they wake up. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well not bad for your first fan fic, I think it's all decent and reading it, it looks ok, but it can be a lot better by length and much more spacing. The idea sounds pretty nice, the first part sounds a bit like a diary entry. |